Fic: when the moon hides her face (Tom/Ginny, 1/1)

[nokomis305]

I went from Tuesday afternoon til this morning without an internet connection. I was like a freakin' heroin addict going through withdrawal. *clutches at internet* On the more positive note, I present fic

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[bellonablack]

I've got to say that Tom's secret isn't much of a secret. :-)

I wonder what Ginny thought of the name 'h0rcrux'. Well, he does care about pleasing her.

I loved Tom by the way. I'm glad he aims to please. XD So Ginny too sees the similarity between Tom and Harry. I half wonder if this is why she loved either Tom ::for his resemblence to Harry:: or Harry ::for his resemblence to Tom::. Hmm. If I were Ginny, I'd want a...Torry, a mix of Harry and Tom. Light and dark are perfect together. XD But if I had to choose, it would be Tom!

<3 your fic and writing style, and thinks for sharing.

Such a pretty little girl, huh ;)

[nokomis305]

Oh, like I'm the only one that thinks that Tom totally macks on all the little girls who fall into his web. :)

I'm glad Tom came across well- he has such a presence, I'm always glad to capture it. Tom and Harry have a lot of things alike, but I too fall on the "yay Tom!" side of the bleachers.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!

[bellonablack]

XD Actually, I think Tom macks on everyone who falls into his web. >.>

...I need Riddle pom-poms. :-)

[nokomis305]

...good point. :)

That set me off imagining what Riddle cheerleaders would look like. I ended up in Nirvana's "Smells like Teen Spirit" video.

[anonymous]

*gulps*

this is beyond everything i could have hoped for *sigh* for me, it describes everything their relationship is about, hate and passion and this:
She couldn’t will herself to regret it.
basically, that sentence is what stood out for me the most. oh and this
Ron was there, and with a rare glimmer of insight he grabbed her hand and whispered, “It’s okay, Gin.”
those two sentences just get to me.

Ambition, she thought. The drive and cunning that made Tom so dangerous.

She hoped that Harry had depths she couldn’t see, because otherwise-

Otherwise she wasn’t sure anymore that he stood a chance.
now i'm just randomly quoting things I like, but this is just.. *purrs* i like this new point of view, never thought about it that way :)

what i'm trying to say is, that I adore this :D *squee*

[nokomis305]

Oh, I'm so very glad you liked it! Yayness.

*grins* Everything you quoted was written very last. This fic took me forever to write, and I'm so glad it all finally came together.

I too adore the passion that their relationship hinges on- it's in no way or fashion good, but it's somehow irresistable.

Thanks!!

[nokomis305]

*blushes* Thank you, darling! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it!

[rainpuddle13]

Yayayya! You finally finished this. I couldn't be prouder. Well, I could, if your internet hadn't gone out and I'd gotten to read this delightful little number earlier!

[nokomis305]

It only took me HALF A YEAR to finish. No big. :)

Those were Bad Days, to be sure. But now the story is here, and I am very glad that you enjoyed it!

[infinitas]

This story is beautiful. I love all the descriptions in it! May we friend each other, by the way?

[nokomis305]

Thank you!

Oh, I adore new friends. *bounces* Nice to meet you!

[infinitas]

Nice to meet you too! *shakes hand*

I love making new friends too! Haha. *friends* :)