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[nokomis305]

Someday, I shall understand the meaning of the term "drabble." :)

For luciademedici:

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[nokomis305]

Thank you!

[sushinase]

He keeps the memory of destroyed Horcruxes underneath the shattered rubble of his mental walls, and Voldemort does not seem to realize that Harry wants to be caught.

He is taken to a ivy-coated cottage and waits for his opportunity.
that sneaky little...

“Because you’re a beautiful child,” Voldemort says with something like a chuckle. “Because you are like me.”
oooh mind-fuckery at its best!

Voldemort takes him from behind, muscling him into the position he wants no matter how Harry struggles. “I am your master,” he hisses. “I am your lord.”

“Never,” Harry replies through gritted teeth.

“We are the same, you and I.” The flash of a serpent’s tongue, flicking against his neck. “How can you kill your reflection?”

*

Harry stands over the twisted, inhuman corpse and thinks, Victory.
so basically he killed himself eh? Or Voldemort lives on in him?

This was their Eden, Harry thinks, staring at the vines twisting serpent-like around the cottage, around the place he was captive and found himself captivated.i like that image. I really

[nokomis305]

Thank you!

*grins* I just liked the idea of Harry becoming what he destroyed and loving (in a way) what he hated. I'm glad you liked it!

[bellonablack]

I thought I should comment on this as well :)

Makes me wonder about Harry's future...whether he will eventually...well, you know. The 'light' side seems hypocritical to me, such an inversion. I wouldn't be surprised.

I love the Eden reference, that was a nice touch. The word 'assure' and how it blends from the Mediwitch to Voldemort's. I like the web image, because the feelings of hate and need become so interwined.

Harry's own point of view, the stabbing 'viciously', as if he is judging himself at that very moment. Of course, Voldemort was perfect...'Who said anything about love?' He was very manipulative, hence perfect.

Good job :)

[nokomis305]

Comments make me giddy like a schoolgirl. :)

I love the idea of the 'good side' becoming the 'bad side' and the whole idea of extremism on either end of the spectrum can turn out just as badly. And what better extremes that Harry and Voldemort?

I see Voldemort as long-divorced from humane emotions, so the only true role he can have within a relationship, as such, would be as the manipulator and the one pulling the strings. He's so delightfully evil. :)

Thank you!!

[siennalyamalor]

creative, dark, and voldie-harry. it's perfect! well done.

[nokomis305]

Thank you!!

[ctheron_power]

I have so much to comment on your fiction, but I can't stop drooling so I'll wrap it up.

You're Voldemort is just too seductive--almost unbearable to deny his every word. I adore him for some wicked reason...as for Harry, well, lucky whore shall I say?