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lol at people
gg people
i wrote a short story for my creative writing class, and here's one response i got:
Michael Ross
Response for “Global”
Inappropriate. It had no theme; I have no idea who these people are and their relationship other than that they are friends. How old are they also? It is also inappropriate to put in parentheses blah blah blah more filler here. I have no idea how to respond to your story. It was very confusing and at the end I knew as much about the characters as I did in the beginning. I am assuming that these people are immature and know nothing about making love but as far as I know it is two friends that decided to have sex randomly.
lololololololllllllll
gg no re
gg people
i wrote a short story for my creative writing class, and here's one response i got:
Michael Ross
Response for “Global”
Inappropriate. It had no theme; I have no idea who these people are and their relationship other than that they are friends. How old are they also? It is also inappropriate to put in parentheses blah blah blah more filler here. I have no idea how to respond to your story. It was very confusing and at the end I knew as much about the characters as I did in the beginning. I am assuming that these people are immature and know nothing about making love but as far as I know it is two friends that decided to have sex randomly.
lololololololllllllll
gg no re