Fic Study #1 (Part two): Ghost Doll Series
Because I finished work too early and I need the feedback to make this gem better, here goes:
(Keep in mind is this just rough guessing, feel free to jump in and correct me. Feedback= equals better writing.)
Target audience: Somewhere between Shojuo and Josei. (I'm leaning towards josei, I think...) What do you think?
Themes: Love, intimacy, trust, healing (More to come here.) What do you think?
Motiffs: "We will be okay." What do you think?Pairings: Tsuzuki + Anna(OC) Hotaru + Emiko (OC+ OC) Amaya + Shichiro (Villian OC + OC)
How was the Hisoka mind-rape in Corrupt Fruit? What does everyone think of Hisoka + Kohaku?
Also with Tsuzuki + Anna, who is more in control in the relationship or is it balanced. I think the power shifts back and forth between them, but it's mostly balanced. My former beta reader says that Anna's more in control. What do you think?
Plus, what does everyone think of the surreal lemons in the story. I have noticed that everyone can still tell it's a lemon. To me, that's good. My tatic is working. What do you think?
Feel free to add your two-cents into this post and make me think.