Comments | noelia_g: Fic: I'd like to have the time I lost (give it back to you) (Brad/Nate, Groundhog Day AU, Part One)

noelia_g

Fic: I'd like to have the time I lost (give it back to you) (Brad/Nate, Groundhog Day AU, Part One)

Jul 18, 2010 21:14

Title: I'd like to have the time I lost (give it back to you ( Read more... )

brad/nate, au, generation kill, au_bingo, fanfic

Comments 5

jones6 July 19 2010, 01:21:13 UTC

This is awesome! I can't wait to read part two :D I already love all the variations of the day - Brad at the party with Nate's nieces was just too cute :) And I absolutely adore how IC you have everyone, and Brad's phone call to Ray is just hilarious.

Retain freedom of maneuver. Orient on the threat.

Oh, Brad ♥

Two little things:

Where it says Sarah, however, seems nonplussed and she nods as if ‘Brad’ explained everything.

Nonplussed actually means confused or bewildered, so I'm not sure if you're using that in the way you mean to.

Also Sofia Coppola is spelled with an f and a double p, only one l.

Off to read part two!

noelia_g July 19 2010, 05:55:07 UTC

Thanks so much for pointing that out! *hides in embarrassment*

I'm so glad you liked it anyway :)

jones6 July 19 2010, 12:13:08 UTC

Don't worry, we all make mistakes :)

sa_da_ko July 19 2010, 22:52:30 UTC

You did it! :D
I'm too sleepy to read right now, so I'm going to do it tomorrow, but yay :D

ext_3248963 August 19 2015, 13:39:44 UTC

Does anyone know where I can find a blank "AU Changes Form" to fill out?