Comments | noelia_g: Fic: Both Sides Now (Batman, Jim/Bruce) 8/?

noelia_g

Fic: Both Sides Now (Batman, Jim/Bruce) 8/?

Dec 13, 2009 20:20

Title: Both Sides Now
Pairings: Jim/Bruce
Rating: NC-17.
Wordcount: 4,500

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batman, bruce, nanowrimo '09, gordon/batman, both sides now, fanfic

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black_dragon December 13 2009, 20:20:12 UTC

Damn....

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noelia_g December 13 2009, 20:23:49 UTC

Begins was on TV over here on Friday, and I was thinking, damn, I like my version better... XDD

I'm going to be rather slow during December, as I have Secret Santa exchanges and a Mystery AU Fic Post-TDK that I have been blackmailed into writing... but I intend to slowly make my way through the rest of this story at a steady pace :D

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black_dragon December 13 2009, 20:19:49 UTC

YAY!!! New chapter!!!
Thank you, it's great!!!

noelia_g December 13 2009, 20:24:45 UTC

Thank you :D

Also, I have gotten your gift today, and I love it so much, I've read the book in Polish but never in English, so it's going to be a blast, and the stickers are gorgeous. Thanks so much! *hugs*

black_dragon December 13 2009, 20:25:55 UTC

Welcome! ;-D

jedibuttercup December 13 2009, 20:20:21 UTC

Quite possibly my favorite part about this whole alternate universe (aside from the Jim/Bruce and the plottiness) is the friendship between Rachel and Jim. I don't know why, but it really tickles me.

I suspect I'll be biting my fingernails often as you continue through the movie plot...

noelia_g December 13 2009, 20:27:20 UTC

I have been thinking a lot about the things I want to change, and Jim/Rachel friendship was something I was sure I'll try - I mean, she mentions 'he's a friend' to Harvey, and I loved that a lot, but I wanted something more. And it cracks me up when she calls him from bathrooms. It won't be the last conversation like that :D

I will be changing a lot from now on, I think this was the last part where things followed pretty close. But there are things changed by the fact that, for example, Jim didn't hire Ramirez or Wuerts for his unit, because of Harvey's advice. So, clearly, the search and seizure will go differently, and so the plot will change. I am just working on it now :D

nemo_r December 13 2009, 22:09:16 UTC

Loved this. Hot sex, lovely and more Montoya...I think I should be worried about the size of my crush.

Like Rachel's bathroom conversations, works nicely in character. And I love Jim's lumpy bed and bad suits, honestly, between him and Peter Burke they're giving law-enforcement a bad name fashion-wise :)

noelia_g December 13 2009, 22:16:40 UTC

Today I have figured out why Diana disappeared from White Collar: she moved to Gotham and hooked up with Montoya. This is my new personal canon. which I may have to write now... damnit

I have a thing for law enforcement professionals in fugly, fugly ties and bad suits. Clearly. ♥

nemo_r December 13 2009, 22:22:37 UTC

OMFG YES. THIS IS SO CANON. Clearly she was too awesome for that 'verse.

Hee, lol, all we need now is for Burke to grow a Jim-stache and the world will EXPLODE.

noelia_g December 13 2009, 22:24:12 UTC

He would look so awful with the 'stache! I WANT THIS.

lurel December 14 2009, 00:35:37 UTC

Oh, I love Jim and Rachel here so much! xD
They just crack me up...

P.S.
I love your layout header pic!!! x3

noelia_g December 14 2009, 10:40:08 UTC

I love them too, they're a blast to write. Honestly, they should just meet and bitch about Harvey and Bruce all the time. <3

Thank you, I am just slightly obsessed with White Collar now. It's fun how many of the Bruce/Gordon people seem to move into that fandom as well, the dynamic just works, doesn't it? Peter <33