HMD/Concrit post!

[nodispenser4u]

I generally enjoy hearing crit. I would definitely like to hear what you think I'm doing wrong/could be doing better with/Hell, I dunno.
So let me know!

Be as harsh as you like. As much as I don't mind a little ass-patting here and there, it generally doesn't leave for much improvement.
Comments are screened and anonymous is enabled, so have a ball.