"I want the whole enchilada"

Jul 18, 2011 08:12

There's so much I love in this episode, but also quite a bit that makes me want to do horrible things to the people who wrote it. But I long ago decided that the only way I could cope with this storyline is by ignoring... well, ignoring the parts that never happened. This is a happy place and I'm living in a happy little bubble where the bad parts ( Read more... )

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NC-17 comment! marsabi July 18 2011, 14:57:10 UTC
"All I need is a bed and some privacy," Luke mumbled, his eyes meeting Reid's.

Reid swallowed hard. "I happen to have a nice bed right through that door."

They both got up off the couch at the same time and Reid took Luke's hand. Silently, they walked into the bedroom.

"Sure?" Reid said softly, and gave Luke's fingers a squeeze.

Luke licked his lips and nodded.

"Thank God!" Reid groaned and Luke laughed. Reid was suddenly all over him. Reid was kissing his lips and neck and stroking his hair. Luke felt his head fall back, allowing Reid more access to the vulnerable curve of his neck and shoulder. Reid's capable hands began to undress Luke. Luke's slightly trembling fingers did the same. Shirts came off. They stroked each other's chests. Reid kissed Luke's nipples and stomach. Luke grabbed at Reid with desperation and they fell onto his bed. More clothes came off. Luke stroked Reid's long legs and then kissed his cock. Luke's mouth trembled as he tasted Reid for the first time. Reid threw his head back and closed his eyes. Luke kissed and stroked him gently. Then Luke glanced up shyly.

"I'm ready," he said and turned over.

"What?"

"I"m good," Luke smiled and indicated that Reid should climb on top. Reid shook his head in disbelief.

"The hell you're ready!" He exclaimed.

He flipped Luke back around.

Reid grabbed Luke's naked hips and he caressed Luke's thighs, pushing them back. He licked at Luke's crack, making Luke jump like a shot of electricity had just gone through him. Reid began sucking and savoring the taste of him. Luke's eyes grew huge and glazed. His head snapped backwards. "Oh," was all he was capable of saying. And then softly, "Reid."

Luke's breath was shallow and ragged. His hands helplessly tangled in Reid's hair.

Reid spread Luke's legs wider and gave him more, pushing his tongue into Luke's tight heat...

(This was based on the very first thing I ever wrote for them. It's not great, but you get the idea. I was soooo mad at the cockblock that I went on Live Journal and just started writing this...). I still comforts me to imagine that it went this way, lol.

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Re: NC-17 comment! qjilla28 July 18 2011, 15:29:55 UTC
A bed, some privacy, and this!!
Rocking on his heals. Looking like he is about to jump out of his skin. Oh yeah, Luke is ready, and Reid knows exactly what he needs...

HOT! Thanks for sharing!

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Re: NC-17 comment! smoothlikebutta July 18 2011, 15:45:15 UTC
This was exactly what happened. Thank you!

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Re: NC-17 comment! sleeper6 July 18 2011, 16:54:01 UTC
Oh yes, Luke was ready!!!

So sexy and good.

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Re: NC-17 comment! greek_09 July 18 2011, 17:47:24 UTC
Can I just say thank you for this?

Soooooooooo hot. Mmmmmmmmmmmm.......

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Re: NC-17 comment! _alicesprings July 18 2011, 23:54:53 UTC
Ohhhh yes!!!

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Re: NC-17 comment! peggin July 19 2011, 17:54:19 UTC
This is awesome, definitely far, far better than the ridiculous crap we got on our TV screens!!!

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Re: NC-17 comment! dpracket July 24 2011, 17:37:04 UTC
*This* is what happened. Definitely! :)

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