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Touch, Parts 5-6

Dec 30, 2010 08:48

Title: Touch, Parts 5-6
Written By: teranee
Category: General
Rating: R
Author's Notes: Lame title, I know, but I ran out of creativity. This thing is freaking long! Anyhoo, Reid gets injured and doesn’t use it as an excuse to emotionally torture Luke. Shocking. Totally TWT - I was gonna make it post-Reid-comes-back-from-the-dead (it totally happens ( Read more... )

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suzvoy December 30 2010, 15:38:31 UTC

I absolutely adored every word of this. I loved their relationship, it's up and it's downs, facing everything together. I love how Reid can be a grumpy swine sometimes but will always, always wants Luke.

Wonderful!

teranee December 30 2010, 15:58:25 UTC

Aww, thanks. That's wonderful feedback. Hehe, Reid is a bit of a bugger sometimes, isn't he? I love writing him being an ass, it's so much fun.

I was soooo worried about this fic. There were moments when I was writing it where I was really negative about it, so reading your comments made me all smiley and squishy. :D

marsabi December 30 2010, 15:55:18 UTC

Aww, great job! It really was cool to have the Noah conversations juxtaposed with Reid and Luke. You did an awesome job showing the difference and having Luke come to see that too. Enjoyed it!

teranee December 30 2010, 23:45:42 UTC

Yay, thank you so much. All those douchey Noah bits make me sad, so I had to try and make up for it with Luke and Reid being their usual awesome selves.

Glad you enjoyed it. :)

teranee December 30 2010, 21:16:12 UTC

Ooops. Think I failed a bit with the HTML with the mega italics at the end there. Oh well, at least it's legible! :D

peggin January 1 2011, 18:52:26 UTC

I just looked, and I didn't see anything wrong with your coding, but I put a second "" after Luke says we have to split up, and I think it looks like it fixed it. Let me know if you see any other issues you need me to fix!

teranee January 1 2011, 23:49:47 UTC

Yay!! Thank you for rescuing me!

My hero! *damsel in distress face* :D

qjilla28 December 30 2010, 21:42:52 UTC

I cannot tell you how excited I am that I found this story. I absolutely LOVE your Luke and Reid (and a little bit of Henry). The contrast between Noah and Reid is very compelling. It is almost hard to believe that the Luke/Noah conversations actually occurred on the show. Poor Luke. It is no wonder why we all despised Noah so much and adored Reid the way we did.

This is truly an amazing story and you are very gifted! Thank you so much!

(oh, and the "Bernard" stuff had me laughing out loud.)

teranee December 30 2010, 23:09:53 UTC

Oh wow! Thank you so much!

Noah really was so horrible to Luke like...I can't even. I think the words kinda speak for themselves, which I why I just transcribed them and didn't add any description. If I hadn't seen it I wouldn't believe just how bad it really was.

Luckily, Dr. Awesome came along and LuRe lived happily and argumentatively ever after. Even picturing Reid being his most asshole-ish, I just can't imagine he'd ever be actually so cruel to Luke. Grumpy and rude and a little belligerent? sure, but he wouldn't want to hurt Luke, ever. Noah, on the other hand, never seemed too bothered by the concept. :D

Glad you liked the Bernard bit - I never know what names to give my characters when I write, and they always seem to end up sounding stupid, so I guess that's where that idea came from.

You're more than welcome for the story, and thank you again for such a wonderful comment. I'm all smiley right now because of it. :)

slayerkitty December 30 2010, 22:28:19 UTC

*flails*

*hugs you*

You are the best ever. :D

This was fantastic. I seriously would pick out all my favorite parts, but then I'd be quoting the whole thing. You out did yourself. :D

teranee December 30 2010, 23:39:16 UTC

Wooo! I'm not sure if I've ever caused flailing before. It's rather exciting! :D

*hugs you back*

Phew! So, so glad you liked it, cos I've been really paranoid about posting it, actually. This fic kinda took over my brain the last couple of weeks, like I couldn't stop writing it - even today I keep thinking of things that I think I really should have put in and kicking myself cos I didn't think of them sooner, darn brain!

Thank you thank you thank you, a thousand times thank you! It's always good to hear praise from a master. :)

slayerkitty December 31 2010, 00:00:33 UTC

HEE. Flailing was required, it's that awesome. :D

Awww, all your stuff is always amazing. You should never be paranoid.

Okay, see, now you're making me blush.