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callmeonetrack May 11 2012, 16:18:01 UTC
Inspiration is failing me on prompts 1-5 for now...

Six: He looks at her sorrowfully and Kara stares back balefully, resolution barely trumping shame and regret. Zak removes the last of his clothes from her bureau and dumps them in his bag, then heads for the door. Kara watches, unmoving, arms crossed, wondering how long it'll take for Lee to call.

Seven: They've been so careful ever since the broken glass incident, but when Lee goes back to War School, they see him off at the airport. Zak is hovering at her left shoulder, and a handshake would look too strange, so she hugs him goodbye, but when Lee's lips press wetly and discreetly to the right side of her neck, Kara has to swallow her whimper.

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word_vomity May 11 2012, 16:49:30 UTC
Oh that first one. resolution barely trumping shame and regret Ouchie! SUCH a good line!

And yikes, whimper swallows? I die forever over swallowed whimpers. :D

Excellent!

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callmeonetrack May 11 2012, 16:53:51 UTC
Thanks bb! I love the whimper swallow! <3

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scifishipper May 11 2012, 21:16:34 UTC
Mmmmm. I love all this angst!

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callmeonetrack May 11 2012, 21:36:41 UTC
Thanks, bb! :)

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kdbleu May 11 2012, 22:47:45 UTC
Six just hurts.

And whimper. Plus sexy. Lovely work.

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callmeonetrack May 11 2012, 23:51:20 UTC
I was mayhaps a bit angsty this morn. Hee. THank you, bb.

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rachelindeed May 12 2012, 04:07:44 UTC
Oh Academy pilots. You suffer so prettily <3 <3

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callmeonetrack May 14 2012, 14:07:16 UTC
Hee. I must've been in an angsty mood! :P

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embolalia May 13 2012, 17:07:53 UTC
Ooh, that last sentence is great ;)

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callmeonetrack May 14 2012, 14:07:39 UTC
Thanks so much! :) WHIMPER! <3 And a little devious Lee is always good. Heh

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