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nkiseki

[Fic: Hetalia] Flower of Romance

Aug 22, 2010 00:53

Title: Flower of Romance
Word Count: ~1000
Characters: England, France
Rating: PG
Summary: All of the shopkeeper's clients appreciated his efforts except for one man. [AU]
Notes: For what_the_fruk's challenge cycle 06: Rose and Apron. Unbeta-ed so, edits please?

( The flower shop was a tiny establishment built with clay red bricks, nestled between an upscale shoes and accessory boutique, and a chain clothing store headquartered in Spain. )

f: axis powers hetalia, length: oneshot, *fanfic, au means i get away with "artistic licen

Comments 14

queen_celestia August 22 2010, 08:28:14 UTC

I liked this. Entertaining but also sort of sweet!

nkiseki August 24 2010, 06:40:27 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

nastybillabong August 22 2010, 09:03:05 UTC

This should have a sequel~ <3 It's very cute. The progression is evident, and I also like how Arthur owns the flower shop. <333

Overall, great job! :D

nkiseki August 24 2010, 06:47:52 UTC

I'm not sure I can write a sequel, but I'll keep that in mind. I really write sequels that deal with the same characters very well so I usually end up with other parts of the same universe. I might give that a try. And thank you so much for reading!

marinoa August 22 2010, 09:57:57 UTC

Oh, how lovely! x3

...I'm trying to say something else here, too, but can't find words. ^_^;

nkiseki August 24 2010, 06:48:36 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this.

nakimochiku August 22 2010, 20:31:19 UTC

that was so freaking cute. loved it. spotted no mistakes by the way, so you're safe on that. ahh, those two. i would have expected Francis to own the flower shop, but i was pleasantly surprised, and, i adored your writing style for this, and~ the idea was freaking unique. D: loved~

nkiseki August 24 2010, 06:58:32 UTC

I'm glad Arthur owning the flower shop worked for you! I'm also really happy you commented on the writing style. I was experimenting with a new style at the beginning, slightly more setting and script-based than the simple way I usually write; so it's nice to know the effort came through.

Thank you so much for the lovely comments.

postingwhore August 22 2010, 20:42:55 UTC

Aww, I enjoyed this. I also want a sequel! :D

nkiseki August 24 2010, 07:00:11 UTC

Thank you! I don't think I'll be writing a sequel to this; but, I might do side stories about the other patrons of the shop.