It's only you...who can turn my wooden heart...

[niz4]

My brain is strange...lol

Title: Tar Baby
Author: Niz4
Email: nimitz4@iinet.net.au
Summary: Wide innocent eyes watch you with a puzzled frown. “But…don’t you like the sex?”
Rating: M (for Mature) look away kiddies…
Characters: River / Jayne
Pairing: Rayne - Het
Timeline: Post-Serenity
Disclaimer: Nope. Not mine...otherwise I would make them

Comments

[beautifuk__]

Oooh...wow.

That was hot.

[niz4]

Thank you - I'm glad you liked it *grins
It was fun to write :)

[thekatebeyond]

I love you.

That is all.

No? Okay, I'll tell you why. Because you are BRILLIANT! And you kill me dead with hot, sexy Jayneness and funny, clever Riverness. And because you write kissing in a way that makes me squeeeeful!

*happysigh*

Yes, Jayne. That was A whole lot of kissin’….

[niz4]

and i LOVE YOU!!!! There is much mutual love! *grins

Because you are BRILLIANT!

Oh, please stop...stop it, I say! *drama school voice - wicked grin

*squeeeee. Gah...I had so much fun writing this one, I kept laughing out loud. At odd times. So my b/f would look up from his book and give me the 'curious stare'.

C'mon - you know what I mean...you can't fool me, I got the V.M.M! Lady - something tells me you've had it too, I know it in my bones! ROFL.

you write kissing in a way that makes me squeeeeful!

*wicked grin to the tenth power. I aim to please

*lustysigh. And it's just suuuuuch a trial having to imagine Jayne being sexy...lusty, funny Jayne moments. See the sacrifices I make!?!?

Yes, Jayne. That was a whole lot of kissin’….

ROFL. I love the idea of her manipulating him to do this - how he is just so damn clueless... *shakes head. poor, poor boy....Ahhhhhh....good times *winks

[thekatebeyond]

Well, you can see what my plans were - they involved Harry Potter, Harry Potter, and more Harry Potter. It was nice though. How were the fireworks?

And it's just suuuuuch a trial having to imagine Jayne being sexy...lusty, funny Jayne moments. See the sacrifices I make!?!?

I think that makes me a sadist, then - 'cause I want to force you to do it again!

I love the tale of Brer Rabbit. It's a thing here. It's almost sort of a secret Southern handshake when people say "Oh, no! Don't throw me in the briar patch!"

[cynthia_arrow]

I love how, like Jayne, we can never tell if River knows exactly what she's doing, or if she really is a crazy, naive girl. Probably some of both. You do that well. Thanks for the hot kissing and the leery, confused Jayne.

Only Jayne would risk being pushed out an airlock for beef jerky. :)

[niz4]

*grins

Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it. Heee - yeah, I love that about River...that it's never completely clear what her intentions are...until it sneaks up and kicks Jayne in the butt. LOL

Only Jayne would risk being pushed out an airlock for beef jerky. :)

ROLF. Absolutely...

[eustacia_vye28]

oooh. I like this. mmmmm. a whole lotta kissin' indeed. :)

[niz4]

*winks. Yeah...and man was it fun imagining it.
LOL

Thanks you! Hey - I'm reading your NOK fic and loving it! It's much excitement - just read the sand storm chap. more more, I say *claps hands

[eustacia_vye28]

it's fun, isn't it? :D

more will be posted next year. ;)

Hotness

[m00nbrain]

So very hot. I believe my screen is sweating.
You write these characters and everything else so very well.

Re: Hotness

[niz4]

*blinks

I gave you the sweaty screen?! *squeee! That's funny and cool!
I'm glad you liked my fic :) Thank you!

Re: Hotness

[m00nbrain]

You're welcome. You totally deserve it.

Re: Hotness

[niz4]

*squee + blush
Thanks again! And...at risk of sounding like a fic-whore, I have other Rayne's that might also appeal. Just say the word and I can send you links :)