twilight - chapter 2

[jibunnohana]

Title: Twilight
Authors: soukoji & jibunnohana
Rating: R
Summary: Halfling, tainted, unworthy - words the angel Sakito ignored living among the heavenly creatures he so adored and aspired to be. But naivite has its limits, and Sakito's fateful meeting with an ancient incubus proved to him that that there's more to goodness than pure white wings.
Notes: Incubus

Comments

[bauci]

Ah, Niya must feel pretty lonely if he accepts Sakitos presence so quickly :P No matter what excuses he makes in his own head XD I'm very curious about what's going to happen next...
Thank you for sharing this with us, it's a lovely read.

[jibunnohana]

I'm glad you're enjoying it~ :3

[ex_shinkai372]

Finally! I was afraid that you've already dropped it. It has been month since the 1st chapter.T_T
Nevertheless I want to say that I do love this fic! It's quite intriguing and has nice flow of events. Keep it up, onegai *preparing for another long waiting until the new update*

[jibunnohana]

Ah, yeah...sorry about the long wait. Life got in the way for a while. X3; Never fear, this'll be continued! (It's already written, just not edited. XD)

[vampire_kiki]

i'm so glad that u continued this story! nice works! and what can i say? they're cute.XD

[jibunnohana]

Thanks! :3 They are way cute, I must agree.

[vampire_kiki]

but i wonder the reason why Niya is being nice? he isn't interested in Sakito or is he just lonely?

[jibunnohana]

Demons just aren't as cruel as everyone says they are, for our purposes. He's a pretty normal guy...that happens to feed on sexual energy. XD;

[princess_momo]

Oh-hooo~ I've been waiting for so long for this chapter!!

It's interesting, Ni~ya and Sakito's "relationship". I feel as if there's something more to both of their histories, something... yeah.

Thanks for the chapter *squeee* I'll be waiting (not so patiently) for the next one!

[jibunnohana]

Sorry about the long wait! X3 I hope the rest will continue to keep you entertained~

[sephlorraine]

Niya's last line had me doing a mental image of Beauty and the Beast (though that was in no way meant to accuse his sexcellence, Ni~ya, of being ugly). xD I really like what you have going here. Sakito's misfortune with being a halfling but putting himself through the misery of trying to be one of them is really easy-- especially since your Sakito seems to have some gut and doesn't just get all teary-eyed over it.

I like your Ni~ya, too, and his "more of a chore to kill him" attitude. ♥

Definitely looking for more. ;D

[jibunnohana]

*dies* His sexellence! XD That's brilliant!

Glad you're enjoying the fic~ :3