Comments | nixa_jane: SGA: Engineering the Fall (PG-13), McKay/Sheppard.

laytoncolt in nixa_jane

SGA: Engineering the Fall (PG-13), McKay/Sheppard.

Jun 07, 2008 23:15

They were so desperate, so out of their depth, and then there was John, with the city lighting up under his fingertips.

( engineering the fall )

slash, sga, au, mckay/sheppard

Comments 57

clear_as_blood June 8 2008, 06:45:25 UTC

This is such a great concept and wonderfully executed. Really lovely.

laytoncolt June 9 2008, 20:06:36 UTC

Thank you! :-)

muck_a_luck June 8 2008, 09:47:20 UTC

Wow. I like the idea and you wrote it beautifully. Poor Lorne. Yay, Teyla! And of course, Yay, Rodney goes without saying. :)

laytoncolt June 9 2008, 20:08:03 UTC

Thank you! :-)

elli June 8 2008, 10:56:57 UTC

Beautifully done... and such a wonderful squel!

laytoncolt June 9 2008, 20:08:41 UTC

Thank you! :-)

Sequel!! jessebee June 8 2008, 11:30:29 UTC

Oh, my day is made! This is excellent, with the suspicion and things not being at all apple-pi now that the truth is out, and putting Lorne in charge of the team! And John struggling with past versus now, very well done.

*mems*

Re: Sequel!! laytoncolt June 9 2008, 20:09:48 UTC

Thank you! :-)

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laytoncolt June 9 2008, 20:10:30 UTC

Thank you! :-)