Re: Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 6/6awarringtonFebruary 15 2011, 14:19:01 UTC
Words cannot express my gratitude that you wrote this, for a number of different reasons...
First there's this: How the hell Spock manages to remain so outwardly calm with this churning need boiling inside him, Jim can't fathom.
Yes! So few people do it, but I love it when the writer acknowledges that Spock is one person on the outside (cool as a cucumber) and another on the inside (a bit of a maelstrom of stuff). So big bonus points for including this! :-)
So, to the pr0n...I have no idea how many K/S sex scenes I've read over the years and I have to say, you've written something really original her that I loved! The idea that Spock can use a meld to control Jim's orgasm, and how quickly Jim latches onto all the possibilities of that was just brilliant! It made for a fabulously long sex scene. :-) I loved how Jim went at Spock's dick just to test his control - so, so Jim! :-)
I really liked that the third meld was qualititively different from the first two, as it had a different function - really nicely done.
There was so much love and tenderness, not told, but shown through their actions and reactions to each other, that was just a delight to read, so that I had a big smile on my face from start to finish. :D
This was all round awesome. Truly.
Did you see the review I left at the archive for it?
Re: Destiny's Bitch : Deleted Scene 6/6nix_thisFebruary 16 2011, 02:40:44 UTC
*g* I'm so glad you liked it, and that it came at a good time (as previously mentioned there is no bad time to receive gift porn, but yeah, yay for good timing!)
I love Spock-as-walking-contradiction (Vulcans in general, but especially Spock) - it's one of the best things to play with in this fandom, this idea that all of their logic and impeccable control exists because they feel so incredibly deeply. It's like the flipside of the tragic misunderstood badboy, taken to the extreme. And who loves dichotomies? Izzit me? Izzit me? It most definitely is! :D
The rest of this is just to make me fall in love with you, isn't it? I mean, you can't praise me for originality, characterization and hotness and not expect there to be consequences. ;)
And I did see the review you left at the archive (haven't responded because work filters the archive and not LJ, which is odd because I read WAY MORE PORN on LJ than I do on the poor, wee archive (if only they knew.. XD) and I hate responding to reviews on my phone.) But, it made me laugh. I don't think anyone's ever called me carnal before. MORE FOOLS THEY.
First there's this: How the hell Spock manages to remain so outwardly calm with this churning need boiling inside him, Jim can't fathom.
Yes! So few people do it, but I love it when the writer acknowledges that Spock is one person on the outside (cool as a cucumber) and another on the inside (a bit of a maelstrom of stuff). So big bonus points for including this! :-)
So, to the pr0n...I have no idea how many K/S sex scenes I've read over the years and I have to say, you've written something really original her that I loved! The idea that Spock can use a meld to control Jim's orgasm, and how quickly Jim latches onto all the possibilities of that was just brilliant! It made for a fabulously long sex scene. :-) I loved how Jim went at Spock's dick just to test his control - so, so Jim! :-)
I really liked that the third meld was qualititively different from the first two, as it had a different function - really nicely done.
There was so much love and tenderness, not told, but shown through their actions and reactions to each other, that was just a delight to read, so that I had a big smile on my face from start to finish. :D
This was all round awesome. Truly.
Did you see the review I left at the archive for it?
*evil grin*
xx
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I love Spock-as-walking-contradiction (Vulcans in general, but especially Spock) - it's one of the best things to play with in this fandom, this idea that all of their logic and impeccable control exists because they feel so incredibly deeply. It's like the flipside of the tragic misunderstood badboy, taken to the extreme. And who loves dichotomies? Izzit me? Izzit me? It most definitely is! :D
The rest of this is just to make me fall in love with you, isn't it? I mean, you can't praise me for originality, characterization and hotness and not expect there to be consequences. ;)
And I did see the review you left at the archive (haven't responded because work filters the archive and not LJ, which is odd because I read WAY MORE PORN on LJ than I do on the poor, wee archive (if only they knew.. XD) and I hate responding to reviews on my phone.) But, it made me laugh. I don't think anyone's ever called me carnal before. MORE FOOLS THEY.
Thank you~!
<3
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