Just Another Killer - Chapter 3

May 13, 2011 07:17

Title: Just Another Killer
Author: Read more... )

2min, rating: pg-13, romance, *fanfic, drama, action

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yaoiokami May 13 2011, 16:51:30 UTC
WOW! It seems like your writing completely changed! It's amazing~~

So can I just outline the lines that I really loved? :3

"Actually, that's probably a fact since you are uncontrollably adorable when you're nervous."

Minho ruffled Taemin's hair in the last sentence and ran off after dodging a jab from Taemin.
SO CUTE. XD

Minho let a smirk grace his face as he watched the younger's face gradually match his hair color.
I loved how you compared this. I can picture it perfectly! ^^

I have nothing to comment on except on how awesome it was! I can't wait to see what else is in store.

P.S. Congrats!! :DD

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nitrostat May 13 2011, 20:14:07 UTC
Aaaaaaah! Thank you so much! You just made my day!! Now I gotta go work on the next chapter with this new found motivation! :D

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yaoiokami May 14 2011, 23:48:05 UTC
:D HOORAY~~~!!

Because I really do love this story. C:

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sashitae May 13 2011, 19:22:45 UTC
Woaahh... Finally Taemin's going to school!!!
And i'm so happy that Minho's there...
OMG, he passed out because of the nervousness???
Poor baby, Minho please take care of him! Hehe...

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nitrostat May 13 2011, 20:18:25 UTC
Thank you so much for reading this!! I'll make sure Minho takes care of him...after he teases him :P

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pinkbiohazard August 19 2011, 17:10:10 UTC
Nice and cute!!! Um I'll be continuing

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