fic for shardaunei

Jun 20, 2011 07:15

For: shardaunei
From: greatfountain

Title: Just a little relish
Pairing/Focus: Ninomiya Kazunari/Kuroki Meisa, background Aiba Masaki/Becky. Features Nino, Meisa, Yamapi, Maki, Arashi, and Becky
Rating: PG-13 for smoking and sexual innuendo
Warnings: Bad hot-dog related jokes, New York City AU
Summary: Kazunari Ninomiya's not going to be selling hot dogs forever. But ( Read more... )

*year: 2011, p: nino/kuroki meisa, r: pg-13

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faiee June 20 2011, 15:04:56 UTC
This is absolutely cute. I had my doubts when I saw Nino/Meisa. Honestly. Meisa's far from my favourite girl, but this was cute, and you wrote her in a way that was Meisa but still endearing.

I love that Mister Kuroki actually loves 'guys who sound like Jason Mraz' despite being the mob head. And I love Pi being a bodyguard. There's so many things about this that made me grin - even without counting all the terrible(-y cute) weiner jokes - so thank you for writing so awesomely.

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greatfountain July 1 2011, 21:33:34 UTC
That's the best compliment I could have gotten omg! I'm so glad you liked her.

lol well I figure when your life is as hard as Nino's you need a break sometime, you know? Thank you for commenting!

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greatfountain July 1 2011, 21:35:15 UTC
Thank you so much! They're quite a pair :l;;

I HAD TO. YOU CAN'T WRITE MEISA WITHOUT MAKI. lol Nino's life is so hard~ or something. Meisa is naughty and I love her. Thank you♥!

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shardaunei June 20 2011, 21:13:38 UTC
You must be a psychic because how else can you know I love Meisa as a mob/yakusa boss' daughter? I love how you made Nino and Meisa equally snarky and how they match wits. omg, you know me so well.
Thanks for the Arashi, Maki, Becky, and Yamapi cameos.

Thank you for the witty fic. I love it. Great job! (^-^)b

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greatfountain July 1 2011, 21:36:07 UTC
I am seriously so glad you liked this, I was freaking out because I wanted to give writing them a try but was worried this was a little too random. This was super-fun to write and ♥!

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littlealex June 21 2011, 09:59:42 UTC
oh man this was AWESOME! And I just want more of it! :D:D

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greatfountain July 1 2011, 21:36:23 UTC
Thank you! :D

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astrangerenters June 21 2011, 14:21:59 UTC
Didn't know how much I wanted Nino/Meisa until I read this. I love the snarky dialogue between them, and my favorite part was Nino switching all her speed dials to his number. LOL he's got balls doing that. I'm glad that Meisa's dad turned out to be a *nice* mob boss in the end - he gets his dream and he gets the girl!

I also love the side Aiba/Becky :)

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greatfountain July 1 2011, 21:37:44 UTC
I would be afraid she would kill me, but I guess Nino is more bamf than me. XD His life is hard enough, I couldn't make him choose in the end♥

lol thank you! I wasn't sure how well that would go over but. :3

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