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VF-Fic: Waiting

Apr 20, 2006 13:29

Title: Waiting (continuation of Watching)
Author: ninnive
Fandom: "Viewfinder"-Series by Yamane Ayano
Characters: Takaba
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Spoilers up to NT7
Summary: sorry, not much going on here, it's just like the title says

( Waiting )

thinking, vf, fic

Comments 23

sasheenka April 20 2006, 11:47:50 UTC

you're evil...always leaving it like that...
...but I love it...
It makes me wonder how Yamane-sensei has planned it...
..but you should better hurry and make Asami-chan appear...any marry Takaba...lol

ninnive April 20 2006, 11:51:11 UTC

I promise, Asami will appear in the next chapter.
:)

sasheenka April 20 2006, 12:24:48 UTC

yay! *dances around happily*

tensai25 April 20 2006, 11:55:40 UTC

nooooooooooo! not again. I thought Asami will appear. Poor Takaba! is just a matter of time that he'll go out of his mind.(if it's me, i'm already out)...

i'm so looking forward to seeing Asami again

ninnive April 20 2006, 15:42:37 UTC

Sorry? No, not really ;P
But he'll be in the next chapter.
:)

sirius_fasha April 20 2006, 12:04:55 UTC

aaaaaaaa until asami has appeared, im always gonna think that takaba's gonna be kidnapped again *shaking from fear*. can't wait for the next one and thanx a lot for fast update!!

ninnive April 20 2006, 15:45:05 UTC

The weather report doesn't see any Takaba-kidnapping in the foreseeable future of this fic
;)

sirius_fasha April 20 2006, 16:44:07 UTC

owh that's nice!!! i have to re-read all of ur chaps again!! *goes off searching for prev chaps*

teecub April 20 2006, 13:21:45 UTC

*Giggles* At least someone was kinda nice to Takaba? Poor lad, I don't blame him for being so scared. He really didn't leave Asami on the best of notes.

ninnive April 20 2006, 15:50:48 UTC

Well, they can't all be bastards to poor Akihito :)
And Asami's reaction will be in the next chapter...

kodoku_megumi April 20 2006, 13:29:38 UTC

woo~ new chapter! *__*

"Asami had threatened to take his freedom away - and then he'd kissed Takaba in a way he'd never been kissed before. Like the other man not only devoured his mouth, but his mind and soul also. Its intensity had been frightening enough that even the memory of it stirred arousal-tinged fear in the young man, making him shiver"

i read this and i'm still lying halfdead on the floor. you described my fav scene from that NT chapter so beautifully *sighs happily*
(update plz *o*)

rajendora April 20 2006, 14:39:26 UTC

I'm just going to agree with everything in Megumi's comment, and add MORE! (when you have time of course!)
That really was a key point, great writing!

ninnive April 20 2006, 15:40:09 UTC

Thanks!
And this was my favourite scene in that NT-chapter, too. That picture just blew my mind.
:)