Comments | ninjainacubicle: My attempts at a short story part 1

ninjainacubicle

My attempts at a short story part 1

Apr 21, 2005 17:38

( No idea what I'm doing )

Comments 7

wadjet April 22 2005, 01:47:12 UTC

Keep up the good work, dear. <3

ninjainacubicle April 23 2005, 00:02:19 UTC

thanks love ♥

wadjet April 23 2005, 01:40:37 UTC

*yawn*

ninjainacubicle April 23 2005, 01:46:15 UTC

*nuzzles*

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darkfoot April 23 2005, 21:44:51 UTC

"The darkness is pressing in on me like a drunken whore trying to make rent"

A-HAH. Personally I love that line, XD. Mm, nothing else much to say other than what I told you, and that it's pretty good now that I actually read instead of skim. Mmm, thou, pre-war? O.o;, .::Pokes,::. Write more! XD, I am eager for the next.

+DF

ninjainacubicle April 24 2005, 05:38:22 UTC

hehe I like that line too :P

I'm transcribing the second chapter now