Excerpt from my lessons...
Had an activity on stronger word choice this morning, and realized that my sentence came from a CCE show only after the fact:
"The people who lived in Sandwich Town began a revolution against Mayor Naise."
The expected revision was something like "The citizens of Sandwich Town revolted against Mayor Naise," but anyway it makes me a little wistful for Law and Murder.
"The people who lived in Sandwich Town began a revolution against Mayor Naise."
The expected revision was something like "The citizens of Sandwich Town revolted against Mayor Naise," but anyway it makes me a little wistful for Law and Murder.