The Shame in Your Defeat; DRRR!!

[nimuu]

I don't believe the first thing I wrote in months that doesn't read like a trainwreck isn't even for KHRfest of Gleefest. Or that it's angst over Izaya, who genuinely is just there for the lulz, but WHATEVER.

Title: The Shame in Your Defeat
Characters: Izaya, Shizuo.
Genre: General, drama.
Summary: A sinner addicted.

Comments

[strawberrykaoru]

Whoa.
Dark fics make my day. I think you've caught this little devil right on the money. I love your style too, it's a little choppy but it's a good kind of choppy. ♥

Just something I caught:
This year he visit’s the bar he works in
There shouldn't be an apostrophe there. :D

[nimuu]

I kind of freaked in case it was too dark for Izaya, since he's always kind of 'LOL!!1' about everything. But I'm really happy it worked for you. <3

Thanks for that! Fixed.

[noetma]

This was a good read~ I like your writing style.

[nimuu]

Thank youuu. Haha, I love your Izaya's face in your icon.

[nimuu]

Izaya's hard to write with all his badassery, so I'm happy he was okay. And I'm waiting on some traumatic background for him, too. ;__; Thank youu.

[lampazo_libre]

oh baby

You popped the cherry to the fandom <3333
Haha, we are all digging it, Y/Y?
And I love your writting style, as usua, to bits.
YOur Izaya is right on the spot, and , OF FUCKING COURSE, the brilliant work with details.

Thank you, and now I'm going to sleep a tad better, knowing there are good authors I know here. \o/

[nimuu]

<3

DRRR is so addictive! BUT WHERE'S THE FIC AT?

Thank god my style's okay, I've been freaking out over it a lot lately. <33 Thanks so much.

lol, i'm going to sleep better knowing there's stripper!Moto porn out there.

[natsumi_chian]

this is really good. dark fics are awesome too 8'D keep it up!

[nimuu]

Thank youu!