SPN: we grew under a bad sun (Sam/Dean, PG-13)

[nilyn]

we grew under a bad sun
Pairing: Sam/Dean (Wincest)
Warnings: incest, implied underage sex, character death (see summary)
Summary: John Winchester dies when Dean is thirteen: five lives the Winchester boys never had.
Word Count: 5,263
A/N: Thanks to sobrecogimiento for betaing! Loosely ordered from most plausible to least and liberties taken with just about

Comments

[lukesmomma]

ONE
You were able to induce such intense emotions in me when I read this that I think I need a little time out before I read on… or erm… maybe not!
My heart had already leapt into my mouth when you were describing Bobby knowing there was something wrong right at the start but by the time I got to ‘…Bobby draws it back he sees the long, deep gash across John's neck and clumsy, childlike stitches, and Bobby thinks he can feel his own heart break, because that is a wound that will never heal, and Dean tried to stitch it up, tried to make it better anyway….’ I was actually fighting back tears. It is so in keeping with the adult Dean has become to try and mend what was too far broken that I just couldn’t seem to help it.
This was incredible.

TWO
Loved this too.

THREE
Dean, ever the protector.

FOUR
Oh my! I seem to have developed a rather worrying habit of holding my breath when I’m reading but I can’t seem to help it! Would it be too strange to describe this as beautiful? I don’t know if it’s the imagery or just the ‘feel’ of the whole thing but you’ve caught me with this one.

FIVE
That one gave me a serious case of the chills but it was still awesome.

I have to say that this is amazing and although I really enjoyed all five I think that the first one has to be my favourite. Thank you so very much for sharing.