Belonging

Jan 08, 2009 13:57

Title: Belonging
Series: Coda
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Ianto
Warnings/Spoilers: Sex. Set during To The Last Man episode
Disclaimer: None of them are mine. Dammit.
Beta: Aquila and Clarrisani

Summary: Jack and Ianto during and after the scene in Jack's Office. Jack's point of view.

A/N: Blame Aquila for this. She linked me to ( Read more... )

series: coda, jack-ianto, ianto, fanfic, jack

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morning_promise January 8 2009, 04:32:04 UTC
Oh my! Let me catch my breath so I can comment (deep sigh).
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful and very hot!

What a wonderful insight to one of my favorite Janto scenes.

Also one of my a favorite photos of Ianto is when he is dancing with Jack and you can see the "little curl at the base of his neck". You are wonderful with all the little details us fangirls (okay older woman who should not be noticing these things) love. :)

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nikki4noo January 8 2009, 04:43:46 UTC
You are most welcome! *blushes* Honestly, one of the nicest comments I have received.

I am amazed that there are very few fics exploring that moment. I am glad that I was able to resonate something with you.

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teachwriteslash January 8 2009, 04:47:35 UTC
I adore this scene and what you've done with it . . . I've always thought that Jack's speech is as close as he will ever get to telling Ianto he loves him in canon and that Ianto gets it, which is why he kisses him.

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nikki4noo January 8 2009, 04:55:21 UTC
Oh Jack said it without words and Ianto wasn't quite ready to respond either, hence him turning it into a physical response. I love that scene and anyone who doesn't think it was Jack telling Ianto that he loves him, needs to rewatch the stunning acting from both Gareth and John in it. One take and they both nailed it.

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

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dr_is_in January 8 2009, 04:48:18 UTC
Damn....that was one of the best written pieces of Janto smut that I've read in awhile (and I don't even want to call it smut because its honestly a whole level above being simply smut). You've captured and built on the emotional tension in that scene from TTLM and made it so much more. This is what other Janto writers should be aiming for.

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nikki4noo January 8 2009, 05:00:04 UTC
Seriously, thank you so much for that. I started thinking about it last night and Jack just kept telling me to do it from his pov only. I think it gives it a bit more a poignancy

There has been a bit of discussion lately about the feminising of their relationship and that a lot of the current stories featuring the characters in terms of the sex seem to project this. I was trying really hard to make sure that this stayed true to sex between two men who don't like to communicate with words and are still tentative around each other.

Again, thank you.

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veronicaluv January 8 2009, 04:49:12 UTC
Oh my god, that was hot. And so lovely. And ended in the best possible way. In your words it all made perfect sense and I loved it. Oh, and it was hot and lovely. Thank you.

V (who isn't making a lot of sense but hopes you get the gist).

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nikki4noo January 8 2009, 05:03:50 UTC
V, you ought to have seen the state of me while writing this! Plus I had that scene on loop as I was writing it so...

Thanks for commenting and glad that you enjoyed reading it.

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observer3 January 8 2009, 05:16:16 UTC
nice raw, hot smut with great imaginary...best of all is Jack's POV-it is emotional, powerful, honest and revealing of his feeling.

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nikki4noo January 8 2009, 05:22:43 UTC
Thank you very much, glad you liked it.

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