"A Better Place", Buffy/Doyle, PG 1/1

[nikitangel]

Title: "A Better Place" 1/1
Author: Nikitangel
Email: Nikitangel_at_hotmail.com
Website: Nikitangel's Fanfic
Livejournal: nikitangel
Disclaimer: If I owned these characters, they’d still be around.
Rating: PG
Pairing: Buffy/Doyle
Distribution: Sure thing, just let me know.
Dedication: Written for Leanne (candylea) who certainly led me to write something I never

Comments

[flurblewig]

Aww, that was cute. I miss Doyle ::sniff::

Like the fuzzy was becoming less ‘confusing static’ and more ‘her favorite pink Angora sweater.’

Lovely image!

[nikitangel]

Thanks! I miss him all the more after trying to crawl inside his head.

Lovely image!

You can thank Ducks for prodding me to flesh that paragraph out - I added that minutes before posting :-)

Awwww!

[theantijoss]

Like the fuzzy was becoming less ‘confusing static’ and more ‘her favorite pink Angora sweater.’

Yay! Exactly what I was talking about! My twinly rocks more than all the rocker in the land. *hugs you*

Re: Awwww!

[nikitangel]

Yay! You were totally right. I keep forgetting that people can't read my mind. They're annoying that way, but I put up with it :-)

And thank you! ::does a little shimmy and rocks out to imaginary song::

[erinalbion]

I'm not sure that I was much help. 'Fuzzy' doesn't begin to describe my head at 5:30, lol.

I knew you could do a good job with your assignment but I loved it even more than I'd thought I would. Your Doyle is right on the money. I love the idea that he and Angel had worked out a deal like that.

Very beautiful story that leaves you with a nice warm feeling in your chest.

[nikitangel]

Moral support is always welcome, especially at 5:30 in the morning :-) And thank you! I feel so much closer to Doyle now. I like to think that he and Angel set up *something* at least. I considered having Buffy find out his girl was Cordelia, but her shock wrecked the tone of the story *g*

Very beautiful story that leaves you with a nice warm feeling in your chest.

Oh, what a nice thing to say! That's just what I was going for.

[suntrails]

She smiled, looking down. "You miss your girl?"

"Every day," he said simply.

"Do you worry she'll forget about you?"

At that Doyle smiled. "Never.”

I miss Doyle!! And I haven't even seen all of Season 1 yet! You captured Doyle's speech pattern wonderfully - without beating people over the head with it.

[nikitangel]

Thank you! Poor girl, you were probably confused by that whole beginning part. Buffy died (for the second time) at the end of BtVS Season 5, by leaping off of a tower into this vortex thingie, thus saving the world (as usual).

And I'm glad his speech pattern worked out. You know how I wrestled with it!

[suntrails]

You blew my cover! I was going to act all cool and fan-ish and pretend I knew what was going on.

[nikitangel]

I mean, um, oh you're SUNtrails! I thought you were someone else. Um, moontrails. So yeah, sorry about that mix-up.