Comments | nikitangel: 'Scars', Sawyer and Ana-Lucia, PG13, 1 of 1, #30 'Denial'

nikitangel

'Scars', Sawyer and Ana-Lucia, PG13, 1 of 1, #30 'Denial'

May 11, 2006 14:48

Fandom: Lost
Title: Scars

Author: nikitangel

Characters: Sawyer, Ana-Lucia

Rating: PG13

Prompt: #30, Denial

Word Count: 1915

Spoilers: Through 2x20, “Two for the Road”

Thanks To: my wonderful beta, tnhand1022

( He waits until dark, not that it’s necessary. Grave site cleared out pretty damn quick. )

fandom:lost, fic:mine

Comments 46

tnhand1022 May 11 2006, 20:03:27 UTC

I can't say it enough: beautiful and poignant. Love it. The final edits you've made fit perfectly. Well done!

nikitangel May 11 2006, 20:08:47 UTC

Thanks for all your help!

quiet_rebel May 11 2006, 20:08:21 UTC

I like this a lot. Great perspective of Ana and her thoughts with Sawyer. Love the comments on her bullet scars. And then the ending where Sawyer thinks about his part in her death. The part about her dying sitting on a couch was also disturbing, but sad.

Nice work!

nikitangel May 11 2006, 20:09:29 UTC

Ooh, great icon! And thank you for letting me know what you liked :)

littleeva May 11 2006, 20:20:52 UTC

Love the icon; do you have more and may I have one?

nikitangel May 11 2006, 20:29:34 UTC

I'm not that talented! This icon is by back_to_better. You're welcome to use it if you credit her, and I'm sure you can find more at that journal.

siricerasi May 11 2006, 20:36:35 UTC

=O

That was amazing. *Amazing*. I love the flashbacks and how sharp everything is and just... everything! Wonderful, wonderful.

nikitangel May 11 2006, 20:47:59 UTC

Thank you so much! That makes me feel wonderful *g*

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nikitangel May 11 2006, 20:49:31 UTC

Thank you so much! What awesome feedback. I wasn't into them as a couple either, but I couldn't resist picking apart that scene and trying to puzzle out what I saw as inconsistencies in Ana's fighting in that ep.

theladylucilla May 11 2006, 20:53:10 UTC

Lovely work. I enjoyed this a lot.
It never occurred to me that he'd see her bullet scars -- very observant of you!
It's also a MUCH better explanation of what happened than Sawyer just not noticing she took the gun. No way is he THAT stupid.

nikitangel May 11 2006, 21:16:03 UTC

Thank you! And I can't take all the credit for thinking about the bullet scars - I think I saw someone mention them somewhere on an MR board last week. Still, I thought it was an interesting concept :)

It's also a MUCH better explanation of what happened than Sawyer just not noticing she took the gun.

Thank you! That was one of my goals. It just doesn't make SENSE otherwise.