Comments | nikita34: this might be the end

nikita34

this might be the end

May 05, 2007 00:37

title: this might be the end
rating: teen
spoilers: nope
disclaimer: don't own

( part 18 )

Comments 21

rainbowjumpsuit May 5 2007, 06:54:43 UTC

I *heart* this chapter
Your fic rocks.

nikita34 May 6 2007, 02:21:10 UTC

YAY lol

thanks :D

jovsg May 5 2007, 07:39:18 UTC

THAT'S what you're gonna leave us with? Dude, you're so evil!

Loving it still, obviously. Ohhh, the suspense. And I hope House doesn't feel too guilty about not voicing his affection before she collapsed.

nikita34 May 6 2007, 02:23:40 UTC

Dude, you're so evil!

::grins::

Well, I'm REALLY going to try and get the next part down soon. There are two ways I can go from here, and I've been debating ever since I started the story. Gah, I hate that.

Anyway, Thanks for commenting, and I'm glad you're still liking this.

jovsg May 6 2007, 05:36:37 UTC

As long as she doesn't lose the baby, I would be fine with whatever you do. I think, given everything that they've been through at this point, that losing a child is not something they could recover from. I easily think it would be the straw that would break them up. She would be inconsolable and he wouldn't really know how to deal with that. Coupled with his own guilt. Gah, it would just be really sad.

nikita34 May 6 2007, 05:55:50 UTC

This may seem insane, but I actually made a diagram of the different routes I could take. There was the losing of the baby, Cameron leaves, House is crushed, and a little over a year later she comes back and they actually do have a kid (tossed that idea because it seemed like a bunch of sap and bloody cliche)

Another way didn't seem as believable so that one's out. Actually...typing this comment helped oddly enough. Alright I've made a decision...

Thanks :D

I`m a gratefull reader ! anonymous May 5 2007, 08:31:25 UTC

I always enjoy your story`s.
This story? Nice work-I really like the mix between humor and drama,but I sure hope Allison isn`t going to lose the baby or become ill.
Hopefully you will find the time to update in the near future, I will bee checking in almost every day,just to see. Thank you again for sharing your talent -you are a fine writer!
;Jameni

Re: I`m a gratefull reader ! nikita34 May 6 2007, 02:25:23 UTC

Aww ::blushes::

Thank you SO much. You're comment gave me chills I was so flattered.

I'm trying to find time to get the next part down and hopefully it'll be soon :D

domilie_fan May 5 2007, 12:14:45 UTC

In response, House pounded a fist on his desk, everyone jumping in shock as he reached out to grab Cameron, winding his arms around her waist possessively as his cheek rested against her stomach,

“Mine,” he said like a three year old who hasn’t learned that everyone should share their toys.

That was the absolutely best!
I love this fic!

nikita34 May 6 2007, 02:26:37 UTC

::laughs::

I like that part too ::giggles:: Adams can step off...so can Chase :D

Thanks so much.

newfoundlover May 5 2007, 12:29:42 UTC

oh, me likey, very intense, keep it up! ;D

nikita34 May 6 2007, 02:26:54 UTC

thanks so much love :D