Dormitory Life ch 1/2

[nikipiyoko]

Title: Dormitory Life
Pairing: Kiseop/Kevin
Rating: pg
Warnings: Kissing, swearing, bad English
Genre: Romance, angst(?)
Disclaimer: as I said before, U-KISS are my slaves WELL, STORY'S MINE

Comments

[its_klutzilla]

oh gosh this is CUTE! esp the end, DON'T WORRY KISEOP EVERYONE LOVES YOU!!!!

Honestly, this was very well written for a oneshot, and even though its not my bias couple *niether is kemaru* in ukiss, this still very cute.

And holy crap youre oneshot is actually the length a one shot needs to be!!! I need to learn how to do that!!! Seriously, making anything less than 14 pages is a HUGE accomplishment for me.

WRITE MORE SWEETY I LOVE YOU'RE STUFF!!!!!!!

AND HAHA I GET TO SPOT!!!!!!!!!

[its_klutzilla]

OH DAYUM I DONT GET TO SPOT??? i just saw it on the community.

Oh well whatever, snooze, you lose, never mind.

what i want to correc though....I SWEAR I DIDNT KNOW THIS HAD TWO CHAPTERS TO IT, OMG I AM SOOOOOO SORRY!!!! THATS A HORRIBLE MISTAKE TO MAKE!!!!!!!

[nikipiyoko]

Sorry hun, it was like... really late when I put it up on the community. But I'll spot on the next chapter, both The Bet and Dormitory life :D

Haha, it's ok hunny, all human beings make mistakes sometimes, and it's not a big deal since it was supposed to be a oneshot in the first place.

I'm so glad you said it's well written, it gives me confidence to write more <3

I'll write more soon hunny! <3 Maybe later today <3

[darkqueen_25]

<33333333333333333333333333333 This si so sweet~~ haha Kevin's so clingy on Kiseop, and Kiseop just wants to sleep....poor Kiseoppie~ WE ALL LOVE YOU KISEOPPIE, DON'T BE SO NEGATIVE!!!

Omg...

“Kiseeeooooop...”
“I'm sleeping, go away”

Silly little Kevin, let ur hyung sleep, then be all adorable in the morning <3

[nikipiyoko]

Thank you... though I wrote this a long time ago, I'm glad you like it <3!

[darkqueen_25]

Yeah...I was sorta just spamming ur masterfic list...XPPP