Commodum Ex Iniuria (The Reward of Injustice) [3/6?]

May 14, 2009 19:25

Title: Commodum Ex Iniuria (The Reward of Injustice) [3/6?] (I told you i don't know where this is going)
Author: Alsike
Pairing: Emily Prentiss/Emma Frost
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The members of the BAU are faced with hunting down a mutant killer.  Other people may also be in pursuit.  And Emily finds out that where there are mutants, divisive politics ( Read more... )

criminal minds, x-men

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star_aristo May 15 2009, 02:44:36 UTC
So, I caught up!
This is such a great fic.

For someone who doesn't know where this story is going... you are really good in catching my interest.

Love Emma and Emily's personalities (although I don't really know criminal minds, just x-men)

I like that you have been updating often.

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harbordesperati May 15 2009, 05:11:09 UTC
So I was having a rather blah day, decided to check your journal on a whim, not at all expecting an update, when... OMG. An update! Day = suddenly brighter.

Love that Emma is 'too bright and crisp' for their environment (perfect mental image), love them skirting around Jean, love their wicked banter and the bitter edge to their flirting. Love your ability to shift from caustic posturing to utmost vulnerability at a moment's notice. Love, above all, this line:

Emma had been a life raft, and when you look at a life raft you don’t remember almost drowning, you remember being saved.

Yes. Yes! Wow. I actually had to pause and marvel at that metaphor. How absolutely revelatory, how absolutely true.

Also: don't mind the tense philosophical debate at all, especially not when it does so much to flesh out their respective modes of understanding the world and their reactions to each other during/in the wake of it are so thoroughly spot-on. Emily's depression and feelings of uselessness post-debate turning into blatant physical need, her ( ... )

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trexkitten May 15 2009, 08:12:23 UTC
Best chapter ever! I loved the telepathic exchanges.

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freakykaethe May 15 2009, 20:21:40 UTC
I love this fic!
Can't wait for the next chapter :)

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triggerhappy May 15 2009, 21:10:14 UTC
I am still really liking this story and can't wait for the rest.

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