Title: Animals and Prizes Timestamps (3.5&4/4) (You know - I should have called this the x-rated sequel or something, because, seriously, these were NOT timestamps
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Okay, firstly, Holly talking with Jade was great, I really liked how they connected and it was nice to see more of Holly, especially her history and her own thoughts about what she is as an omega. The part about Jade's mom letting Tori in was also very powerful. And of course, another great ending line. 'Hug-slut', heh.
I loved how you opened the last chapter, with Tori being so clueless and it was so hilarious, everybody's comments to her on it, especially Trina and David (You're going to love your mate... With your body."/"Happy first heat orgy, or whatever."/"If you use it for kinky sensation play stuff, I'm never going to forgive you."/and Trina's last line was pure gold). The prelude was just as good, I loved Tori being upset with Beck, and Sikowitz was brilliant ("I have tragically been forbidden by the school from encouraging nakedness in my class"!)
The sex... fisting isn't my kink, but it was extremely hot and incredibly intense. Better even than the one where Emma fisted Emily. I found it very realistic and powerful, and enjoyed how despite Jade seemingly losing control if her inhibitions, she still retained that part of her character which doesn't want to be controlled, and how Tori recognized that, and knew when to take control herself. Seeing Jade's point of view after it all was also great, as was the reciprocation. I know we probably won't see more of this, but it was a great journey, and thank you for it all.
A final thought: "Let's just say, you wish you had a knot like she does. It's like double your best, and she can tie for fucking forty minutes." Guess Jade was telling the truth after all... ;)
:D Yay! I was totally thinking about that line when I was writing this section. I wanted Jade to have inadvertently told the truth. And lo, she did. :)
When I was doing research for the sex I accidentally got onto this weird Christian Sex website which was talking about fisting as a spiritual act. But it was very serious that the man should fist the woman because the reverse would destroy the family, society, etc., if the man couldn't handle it. After I finished being amused, horrified, and offended, I thought a lot about what that sort of power differential would mean for Jade and whether she would be okay with it or not. Essentially, NOT. But the heat would make her want it while it was happening. It would only be after when the impact would hit. Essentially, my kink is angst, so whatever gets me there is fine with me!
And I love Trina. Trina makes every scene better. :)
That is amusing and horrifying. I have a friend who would love that site, I think. Mind sending me the link?
In any case, I think you got it perfectly across, and there was angst, but just enough to transmit what exactly happened, and not enough to ruin the hotness and adorableness of the scene.
Thank you! You know, I said we probably won't have more of this, but now I just want random scenes of them interacting with Trina.
I loved how you opened the last chapter, with Tori being so clueless and it was so hilarious, everybody's comments to her on it, especially Trina and David (You're going to love your mate... With your body."/"Happy first heat orgy, or whatever."/"If you use it for kinky sensation play stuff, I'm never going to forgive you."/and Trina's last line was pure gold). The prelude was just as good, I loved Tori being upset with Beck, and Sikowitz was brilliant ("I have tragically been forbidden by the school from encouraging nakedness in my class"!)
The sex... fisting isn't my kink, but it was extremely hot and incredibly intense. Better even than the one where Emma fisted Emily. I found it very realistic and powerful, and enjoyed how despite Jade seemingly losing control if her inhibitions, she still retained that part of her character which doesn't want to be controlled, and how Tori recognized that, and knew when to take control herself.
Seeing Jade's point of view after it all was also great, as was the reciprocation. I know we probably won't see more of this, but it was a great journey, and thank you for it all.
A final thought: "Let's just say, you wish you had a knot like she does. It's like double your best, and she can tie for fucking forty minutes." Guess Jade was telling the truth after all... ;)
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When I was doing research for the sex I accidentally got onto this weird Christian Sex website which was talking about fisting as a spiritual act. But it was very serious that the man should fist the woman because the reverse would destroy the family, society, etc., if the man couldn't handle it. After I finished being amused, horrified, and offended, I thought a lot about what that sort of power differential would mean for Jade and whether she would be okay with it or not. Essentially, NOT. But the heat would make her want it while it was happening. It would only be after when the impact would hit. Essentially, my kink is angst, so whatever gets me there is fine with me!
And I love Trina. Trina makes every scene better. :)
Thank you!
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In any case, I think you got it perfectly across, and there was angst, but just enough to transmit what exactly happened, and not enough to ruin the hotness and adorableness of the scene.
Thank you! You know, I said we probably won't have more of this, but now I just want random scenes of them interacting with Trina.
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:)
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