Danny Zuko 11: First Time Fireworks

Jul 21, 2010 08:53



Title: Danny Zuko was a Hot Chick (part 11 of 20)
Author: Alsike
Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over
Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss
Rating: NC-17
AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.
Word Count: 2208
Citrus Taste Summer Battle Prompt #11. First Time Fireworks 
Apologies: I’m going to attempt to post these in chronological order, but I may not always succeed ( Read more... )

criminal minds, summer, nc-17, x-men, au, citrus taste, emma/emily

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precious_sin July 21 2010, 15:06:05 UTC
Emma would want to be Danny. Thanks for making my workday infinitely better=D

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katiepult July 21 2010, 15:18:30 UTC
“You can’t… you can’t just have that summer and then leave it all behind. Go back like nothing is different.”

--I loved this Chapter more than any other. It really tells you what a damaged creature Emma was raised as. Her father is a shit. Her sister is a nasty bitch (well, Adrienne more than Cordelia, but technically they both are. Hell even Emma is) and here's Emma trying to be cool and kissing a boy under the firework display instead of kissing Emily, because that's what she's expected to do.

And it's soooo much more. Again, loved this chapter!

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mayireadtoday July 21 2010, 15:56:27 UTC
Absolutely hilarious: “I asked Emily if you guys had had a fight, but she said no, and that you had been really nice to her yesterday, and she probably should have expected a backlash.” He narrowed his eyes. “She knows you way too well.”
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“Yes,” he told Emily later. “She’s having a psychotic episode. Don’t worry about it, she’ll come round in a day or so.”

I'm really upset that Emily hit Emma IN THE FACE. So not Fing cool, Emily.

This made me smile: “Fuck,” Emma muttered, barely audibly, not looking at her. “I really wanted to be Danny Zuko.”

I can really see the future of this universe. Emily and Emma keep on coming together and breaking up year after year, until Emma has grown up enough to settle down with Emily. I can just see one day Emma moving in with Emily while Emily's away on a case. And then Emily finally brings Emma to the FBI Family Picnic.

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scoutnabout July 21 2010, 16:36:24 UTC
Love the "checkerboard" statement in the A/N. I looked right and was like, "Oh, I get it; I didn't realize 'that' was her system/schedule."
Rugby: fun! If it's you playing, be safe, and if not, don't get run over by Rugby players plowing over the sidelines (or just plowing over the keg)
Good and memorable chapter; Emma's so used to things being messed up that she can't seem to let herself be happy. I also get the 'bragging rights' and how she used that as an excuse and justification, but it makes sense for that teenage check-mark to feel important too.

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jijibebe July 23 2010, 01:26:05 UTC
Whoa, that punch was unexpected, but I love that Emily is Danny Zuko.

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