Lycanthropy 1

[nike_ravus]

Title: Lycanthropy (Part 1)

Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Peter Parker, Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Rating: NC-17, WARNING: contains het, eww.

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Word Count: 3624

Prompt: 034. Animalistic

Apologies: Yeah, I spent like ten minutes writing about how much this fic irritates me, but LJ lost it,

Comments

[katiepult]

Yeah, the het was eww, but you didn't go too graphic on us. I'm looking forward to seeing you continue this since I've always loved your Emily/Emma, your AUs, and I have a thing for werewolves/vamps/supernatural (Years before it became the "in" thing).

I know you said you didn't like how this turned out but I enjoyed it :) my interest is definately peeked.

Edit: btw- why choose Peter "i'm so boring any my jokes never get laughs" Parker?

[nike_ravus]

:D

I hope I manage to pull off the werewolves well enough for you! My main influences come from about 12 years ago and previous, so none of this modern sparkly stuff!

Thank you!

Re: Spidey, I think my thought process was 'oh, Emma should have a serious boyfriend, because that will be weird,' and I went through the usual suspects, but none fit. [Scott-anger, Shaw-yuck, Bobby-makes me want to vomit] So I called him Peter just as a stand in, and then decided that poor Spidey should get to experience the hotness that is Emma, if only for a little while. So yeah, it was *because* he's boring.

[scoutnabout]

I see what you mean, but I'm glad you wrote it. I guess the beginning seemed like a description of something twisted between Stephen King's 'The Stand' and actual Lycanthropy and then I wasn't sure about shape-shifting being a part of it, or just the mind part happening. I really enjoyed the concept of Emily and Emma having a confrontation and Emma getting extremely worked up by it. I loved the visuals of what she wanted in getting Emily to submit and then later Emily's in visualizing herself being the one instead of the guy.
If you clarify some points later or do some editing of this one, I can see it being an enjoyable short-story.(rather than a still enjoyable, but less satisfying work in progress.)

P.s.

[scoutnabout]

The part with Emily running across the lawn like "the hounds of hell were chasing her" had me audibly crack-up.

[nike_ravus]

Yeah, this isn't supposed to be a work in progress. I'll have the next part up probably tomorrow night. I'm really close to actually having it finished so I risked putting a bit up. It will have plot!
I hope it does become a satisfying short story!

[katiepult]

short story = good enough for me as long as there's more :)

[rebelbyrdie]

Ooh something to do with werewolves that's new and doesn't make me want to vomit...and I thought it was impossible here lately. Ah well, I should never doubt your Emma and Emily. I can't wait to read the rest...even if there is more of Parker.

[gmndgmt]

Lo leí muy rápido y creo que solo entendí la mitad, mi manejo de tu idioma esta seriamente deteriorado. Tendré que releerlo mas tarde; a final de cuentas tus historias son definitivamente disfrutables. Saludos

[nike_ravus]

Oh no! This is what happens when I go AWOL for a couple of weeks. I must return to prolificness!

[gmndgmt]

Definitivamente! Es tu culpa que tenga problemas con tu idioma, ARREGLALO! jeje.
Esta bien, sin tanto drama, me encantaria leerte mas seguido.

[ryoshu]

hmmm I liked your take on the werewolves. that was a refreshing. not new but nice change of pace. the teacher room scene was nicely done to setup the thinking about each other later. looking forward to seeing the next chapter.