Bicker 7

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Title: Bicker pt 7

Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Rating: NC-17

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Word Count: 2631

Prompt: 029. Rim Job

Apologies: And more of the Princeton Eating Club AU! If you don't know what Eating Clubs are, think Hellfire Club for college students. Bicker is the system for picking

Comments

[heart1e55m00mba]

OH NOES!

Great chapter. Look forward to the next update.

[marygriggs]

I'm not sure why you're doubting your work--the dialogue is smooth and the pacing is very good. The cliff hanger at the end of this chapter will definitely have me back regularly, looking for updates.

Thanks for sharing.

[precious_sin]

Oh. I love this verse so. And man I'm curious to see what happens with Selene.

EmEmily

[blet_b]

Oh yes, this is great! I was waiting for her!

Re: EmEmily

[blet_b]

waits around lurking for more bicker!

[theatrekid510]

so, instinctively i know who the person at the end of the chapter is, and i can see much angst coming, AND though in all the other stories em and em seem to have a broken back and forth thing, this story seems so much more light hearted than the others...i am wishing that just til they leave school that they continue to "use" each other and have fun!!

but oh, how i do love the angst!!

thank you for continuing this story and others are right - you're writing is still spot on!