City on the River

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Title: City on the River 13/?
Author: Alsike
Fandom: Criminal Minds/X-Men
Pairing: Emily Prentiss... eventually Emma Frost
Rating: PG-15
Summary: When one person travels into an alternate universe a thousand others are created. What if Didi showed up without a time slip on Emily's doorstep, in a world without mutants? What would a twenty-five

Comments

[rebelbyrdie]

It is insane, but this was such a great chapter. The interactions were spot on. The part with Didi's sticky fingers and Emma was just too cute. Emily's relationship with her mother is complicated and believable.

[mauders]

RL can be a bummer sometimes and it sounds like you've had a crappy week. How dare that dog bite you!

It seems like way more than a week since you've updated and I do find myself tapping my foot impatiently, but...hey, great chapter!

This is one of my favourite stories. I love that the Ambassador Prentiss has shown up to stir things up and the interplay between Emma & Emily is fun and Emma seems to be mucg more relaxed around Emily now. Didi is beyond cute.

Oh this line cracked me up for some reason.

"Emily put her head under the pillow and attempted self-asphyxiation."

[precious_sin]

I agree with rebel. You get them so well, and the way they all act is so beleveable. Love how Emily tried the imagine if we both had twins approach there=)

[elemental_light]

Too cute. Also props to the Ambassador for being pretty understanding about the whole malarkey.

[authorw]

This was great!
I love what Emma said to the Ambassador!
Love Emma's comment about Emily bunking with her.