Hellfire 10.5

Feb 10, 2010 12:11

Title: Hellfire 10.5

Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Rating: NC-17

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Apologies: Not exactly what I promised. But hopefully it satisfies.

Prompt: 011. Blindfold (Not going to waste the opportunity ;) )

~ the way you scream is the ultimate ~ )

criminal minds, nc-17, hellfire, x-men, citrus taste, emma/emily

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scoutnabout February 10 2010, 18:09:58 UTC
What a nice surprise!

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theatrekid510 February 10 2010, 19:54:26 UTC
so fabulous. i like them this way...intimate and yet torn between anger and love and hate and lust.

please feel free to write a few more like this :) totally and utterly made my day!!

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thudonkey February 10 2010, 23:23:05 UTC
oh, yes, it satisfies. Just lovely, in fact.

I'm rather puzzled by Emily's implication that she isn't a masochist, though. Getting off on humiliation isn't a form of masochism? Of course, there's a million and one definitions of the term.

I think I also read between the lines of this AU as there being pain with the pleasure. . .however that may well be my kink rather than Emily's.

Guess that's just another good reason to re-read. Yay!

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nike_ravus February 11 2010, 00:27:16 UTC
I am very glad.

Emily definitely implies that she isn't a masochist, and then clearly proves the opposite! I would say she is a bottom, but determinedly not a sub, with tendencies towards masochism, although at this point she hasn't fully explored them yet. She would call it: 'doesn't have a problem with rough sex.' Of course, when she's drugged out of her mind that 'determinedly not a sub' becomes 'please may I lick your boots?'

Emma on the other hand is still trying to be nice. Verbal humiliation is just dirty talk to her, and if it doesn't hurt, it isn't fun. She doesn't want to break her human yet, and isn't sure quite how far she can push, but it's only a matter of time before she's had enough of pussyfooting around. (um, pun intended?)

Thanks for commenting!

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thudonkey February 12 2010, 01:05:12 UTC
cool, that matches with how I read it.

Now, the Emily in Scott's Emma -- her I'd describe as submissive sexually. Of course, Emily is never submissive in day-to-day life, but you do write her as pretty much rolling over to Emma.

Of course, that's all quite distinct from wanting to be emotionally hurt. All the Emilies (lol) quite distinctly hate that, and sadly they're pretty much all getting hurt emotionally in one way or another.

At least you don't have them being hurt by JJ like most every other FF writer does, though. Bless you for that! Emma's so very much more creative with her sadism. . . and purposeful, of course.

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sneaky_in_red February 11 2010, 00:50:17 UTC
don't I love you very much? :D A great "deleted scene" piece. :D I'm not into S&M, but somehow your writing makes it comfortable to read. Great one!

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rebelbyrdie February 11 2010, 01:12:49 UTC
Is it wierd that that little deleted scene fic just totally turned my night around? It's proabably wierd, oh well, it never the less was a nice end to an otherwise god-awful day.

I laughed so hard at Emily's last comment, "If she were about to die again, this was the way she wanted to go" that I scared my roomate a little. I loved Emma here, she's just perfect.

Thanks!

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nike_ravus February 11 2010, 13:11:53 UTC
Glad to be of service! I hope today is better for you!

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