Hellfire 12 - Final Part

[nike_ravus]

Title: Hellfire (12/12) (Sequel to Human)

Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Rating: R

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Apologies: The end, and the ficmix.

Summary: Emma's an X-man now, but she wasn't always fighting for truth, justice, and peaceful-coexistence. Emily has had a taste of her past, but is she

Comments

[thudonkey]

sigh. I want more. Can I be specific and say I want part 10.5? I could just imagine it, but I like your imagination much better.

I know it's not over, but I want the details too. :)

[thudonkey]

Oh, and the "it would be redundant" line? Ouch. That speaks very very loudly. Exceptional.

[nike_ravus]

Awesome, thank you.

If I tell you I've started 10.5... don't get your hopes up too much, because the sex hasn't even started, but there was a little leftover dialogue that needed to be used, so we'll see where it goes. :)

[anonymous]

I love the line it is the most common form of insanity I have ever seen. That is so true. When you are in love all forms of sanity and rational thought seem to escape ones being, and all that matters is the person you are in love with. I hate that they aren't together, but it is so typical of them. I just want them to figure this thing out. Please continue with their story line.

I love your pairing of these characters. I didn't know how you were going to make this work but from your first fic 'til now you seemto to make so believeable. I stay up late at night hoping that you post a fic. I like Emily/Emma more than Emily/JJ and those two were my favorite pairings. I must say you are an awesome writer and I look forward to reading more from you.

Thanks

[nike_ravus]

Wow, thank you so much!

I'm very glad the story is believable. And I really wasn't intending on building a catapult to hurl stones at an OTP... all right, i was, I just didn't realize there would be so many stones.

I hope you stay with me, as they continue to (or to not) figure these things out.

[sneaky_in_red]

Why must it be over when I started to ship this two? Can you please continue it? (although I'll be perfectly happy if you update Bicker. ;) I'm easily pleased - no pun intended).
Great read. Thanks for sharing.

[nike_ravus]

Aww, It's not totally over! There is still plentiful angst for them to suffer through! But maybe Bicker needs a bit of progress first. :)

Thank you!

[authorw]

Love "It would be redundant".
More please!

[nike_ravus]

Thanks! I will try to deliver soon!

[rebelbyrdie]

Redundant insanity that comes packaged in white leather and black power-suits, I like it.

[nike_ravus]

Awesome. Thanks! :)