Hellfire 10

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Title: Hellfire (10/12) (Sequel to Human)

Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Rating: R

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Apologies: Climax! But I'm rescinding my promise of sex. If there is a plot, I just can't do it. Maybe a sidestory later.

Summary: Emma's an X-man now, but she wasn't always fighting for

Comments

[cmfanz]

Awesome chapter!
I liked how Emma is so powerful and assertive when facing her father and Sebastian and defending her position as a White Queen. She's so territorial of Emily and yet wishing sometimes to destroy her is so sad.
Emily recognizing and reacting to Emma's scent, even in her state, was fun to read. How will she react when the drugs ware off?
Looking impatiently for the next chapter.

Unpredictable....

[carla124]

Not only do you write so well but the plot is so unpredictable. I'm waiting to see what will happen when Emily wakes. Frankly, a "happy ending" would surprise me because E and E tend to have this dance of coming together and then coming apart-but they can never say good-bye! I enjoy the unconventionality of their relationship!

[theatrekid510]

FABULOUS! Absolutely fran-freaking-tastic....i just can't seem to get enough. oh but how my heart sank when i read that you were rescinding your promise of sex...these two and sex and are so undeniably hot. as i've mentioned before, i've never seen a better pairing. the possessiveness of emma to protect emily and her willingness to do anything to protect her made my heart swell even if it was only momentary as they're always to be torn in love.

[authorw]

Go Emma, I love that she stood up for Emily!
Emily's reaction when she wakes up is going to be really really good!

[rebelbyrdie]

Wow. Emma is a teacher, Emma is a telepath, Emma is an Xman, Emma is, and always will be the White Queen. She is also in love with Emily. She has facets and angles and a diamond skin that hides a bleeding heart and this chapter captures all of that and more. The last chapter belonged to Emily, but this one is all Emma.

The Frost family dynamics make Emily's family look like the Brady Bunch.

I am so addicted to this pairing.