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nike_ravus

Hellfire 7

Jan 28, 2010 21:09

Title: Hellfire (7/9?) (Sequel to Human)

Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Rating: R

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Apologies: I said there would be plot, but the party isn't until Friday, so, another chapter where nothing happens. I wish this one actually had some sort of driving force, but I'm so ( Read more... )

criminal minds, hellfire, x-men, emma/emily

Comments 11

rebelbyrdie January 29 2010, 03:03:52 UTC

Seriously, I want to crawl through my laptop and into this story. Someone really needs to slap some sense into both ladies. Turning to diamond form might block telepathy, but Emma can't escape herself or what her heart is telling her. Emily just needs to wake up and smell the leather and leave the Hellfire club alone. Her FBI badge and gun will do her little good there. I swear they are the dumbest smart women in the world some days.

And I think I lost my perspective on this whole real life- fanfiction balence.

nike_ravus January 29 2010, 04:02:32 UTC

That's okay!

I am sure they will wish they had had your advice afterwards! ;)

rebelbyrdie January 29 2010, 04:14:42 UTC

If I had a dollar every time a fictional charecter should take my advice I could quit work and be an obsessed fangirl full time.

elemental_light January 29 2010, 07:39:15 UTC

I was going to say that in the Emma-Jean interactions, Emma always seems to be playing the petulant 13-year old, as opposed to actually being herself. I can see why, based on previous interactions, but somehow I thought your Emma might have made put a bit more effort in? Although I can see how Jean's parting shot was rather 'terrifying' to someone like Emma.

nike_ravus January 29 2010, 13:58:33 UTC

Especially because she's trying to keep it secret how she's been fucking everything up.

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nike_ravus January 29 2010, 13:54:37 UTC

Indeed.

CMfanz anonymous January 29 2010, 14:25:02 UTC

Will Emma reconsider her decision and call Emily?
I hope the latter will heed Ro advice and not go to the Hellfire Club, at least not alone.
As someone mentioned above Emma is acting as a 13 years old, so do Emily.
I'm dreamining that Jean and Ro will get fed up with both of them and gang up to put some sense in them so they can see that they're made for each other. ;-D

shaylafitz January 29 2010, 18:58:20 UTC

*bounce!*

Need I say more? :D