Wolf in Scott's Clothing

[nike_ravus]

Title: Wolf in Scott's Clothing

Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men (OMG! Not a crossover!)

Pairing: Emma Frost/Betsy Braddock/(Scott Summers???)

Rating: NC-17 - This is porn people!

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Word Count: 1892

Prompt: 031. Costumes - I'm interpreting this prompt in an odd way. I think it works though.

WARNING: This is incredibly hardcore,

Comments

[rebelbyrdie]

Sometimes it's hard to think about Hellfire Club Emma. It's such an ingrained, important part of her charecter, but it's not particuarly fun to think about the details. It's good to remember, though, only if it's to measure how far she's come.

This was a masterpiece of mind-fuckery on top of the graphic sex, and I'm not sure which one is more of a violation.

This also strongly reminds me of the Hellfire chapter of Princess Alexandria's '500 Miles', and that's a HUGE compliment as that's probably my favorite piece of fanfic, period.

This is dark, gritty and shows Emma's dark side very well.

I don't think you should be especially sorry about writing it. It's a phenomenal dark!Emma fic.

Besides, it's still less annoying then actual Scott/Emma fic.

[scoutnabout]

I'm just gonna comment before I even read this.

You are in a mood tonight judging by your intro :D One handed... man I need to get me a keyboard that will support that option. Naughty, naughty.

Okay, I'll read this now.

[nike_ravus]

Laptops are very handy things. :p

[nike_ravus]

It is important, and it's one of the things that makes her really interesting to write, because she is this mess of contradictions and experiences and very ambiguous morality.

Thank you for the compliment. I do love 500 Miles myself, but one of the things that struck me about the Hellfire section was the use of drugs. Substance abuse does seem to be one of her thematic elements of Emma's character (with its villain/victim dichotomy), so it works in her universe. But I like to charge the whole way in the other direction, where Emma is entirely aware of what she is doing and entirely enjoying it (and rather expects that everyone else is too).

I think I'm more sorry about *how* I wrote it. I shouldn't find mind-fuckery and noncon this hot.

But this is absolutely the only way I can conceptualize Scott/Emma. I would not be surprised if she ends up doing something like this. The only trouble is the Marvel morality would not allow her to succeed, which is too bad. :(

[heart1e55m00mba]

I have to admit that I prefer this over Scott/Emma any day. Your dark!Emma was wonderful.

[scoutnabout]

Okay, maybe a waiver about the health risks of anal penetration before vaginal should be brought up for those possibly unaware readers.

Yeah, you really went off on this one; I'd say more detail than I've noticed in (what my memory serves) your more directly female/female fics. Vhat vould Freud say? Just kidding. I'm glad that it was Emma in there, even if she is one twisted hellcat. ;D

[nike_ravus]

Ooh, good advice. I was hoping most would at least intuit it and go "oh, no! Don't *do* that!"

I think it is easier to add in details when you do not have to be either respectful of your characters or your readers. That is, when one is writing porn rather than smut. And no silly emotions to muddy the waters.

I'm afraid this one is just one of my already extensive body of 'penis envy' fics. Although this one had it most literally. :D

Now it is clear I need to take a shot at strictly female/female hardcore smut. I think it's easier to objectify male...bits, but as I have now had practice in writing all sorts of sexual humiliation scenes, I may be able to pull it off. Especially when I have such a lovely 'twisted hellcat' to work with. :)

[wizened_cynic]

Well, well. You really pulled it off quite well, didn't you? Smut written in 2nd person POV usually doesn't work for me, but it did here and wow, it was hot. Brava! (I still don't know who these people are.)

[nike_ravus]

Why thank you!

I think the 2nd person worked all right because I had to differentiate between the POV character and the POV's body, but it really can be painful.

(I'm glad the smut still works, even without 40 years of highly (ir)relevant backstory. I totally picked Betsy at random, but hey, hot purple-haired ninja, how can you go wrong?)

[salomesensei]

You've been putting up fic at citrus-taste and I never know your fandoms well enough to read your fic, dang it. But this one had such a warning label that I couldn't resist.

This is wicked hot, and the 2nd-person works perfectly. That I don't know the characters I'm sure tempers my enjoyment. I wish I knew the full depth of the particular depravity by fandom context, but I surely know good vicious kink when I read it. The non-con is rough to handle, but the writing is excellent.

Now can't you write in some fandoms I know?!

[nike_ravus]

I didn't expect to *attract* readers with that warning!

(Not that I'm unhappy that I did)

A lot of my stuff is whacked out AU Crossovers which have diverged so far from canon that there's very little you need to know. (This one is actually the most tightly linked, since Emma is supposed to be in love with Scott, though very few can stomach the horror, when posession and sexual exploitation is far more in character.)

However, I may have to add Sebastien into my tales, since there's never a lack of need for a demon of a butler. (I totally only started watching Kuroshitsujii and Samurai Champloo after reading citrus taste.)

[salomesensei]

Yay, welcome to Samurai Champloo and Kuroshitsuji love! Both are relatively recent addictions for me. (I'm an Inuyasha girl and was a Kirk/Spock geek back in the day.)

I look forward to reading your Sebastian fic, should you decide to wander in. :)