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nike_ravus

City on the River

Dec 13, 2009 23:34

Title: City on the River 7/?
Author: Alsike
Fandom: Criminal Minds/X-Men
Pairing: Emily Prentiss... eventually Emma Frost
Rating: PG-13
Summary: When one person travels into an alternate universe a thousand others are created. What if Didi showed up without a time slip on Emily's doorstep, in a world without mutants? What would a twenty-five year old ( Read more... )

city on the river, didi, criminal minds, x-men, emma/emily

Comments 6

heart1e55m00mba December 14 2009, 06:50:43 UTC

I do recommend not throwing small children in the river as a mood lifter, although I am aware that it often seems quite efficacious at the time. The results, I am told, are rather a downer.

I LOLed IRL.

flowerhammer December 14 2009, 23:57:39 UTC

Yes, Elizabeth's message is hilarious!

I think it's the first time that we get this Emma's POV, it's nice to know a bit more about her. Even if she's not interested in Battlestar Galactica.

nike_ravus December 15 2009, 00:42:49 UTC

Well, it is 1997, and thus it was a kids show that went off air when Emma was six. Even if she knew what it was she would probably be uninterested.

I think we may see more of Elizabeth... ;)

authorw December 15 2009, 02:44:46 UTC

I love what Emily's mother said!
Emily is sweet and caring but it kind of freaks Emma out which is funny!

rebelbyrdie December 15 2009, 02:48:37 UTC

"...They would soon own an island nation." Then Didi would really feel at home.

Benji is great!

I love it. anonymous December 18 2009, 19:30:48 UTC

I love this story. I started it today and finished off all seven chapters in a short time. Please update soon. I hope you bring back Garcia. What will Elizabeth do next? Emily is so sweet but Emma is still suspicious. I am hoping for a romance but I am glad you are taking your time.