It's Hard to be a Man

Nov 17, 2009 22:08

Title: It's Hard to be a Man part 4

Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Rating: NC-17

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Word Count: 1681

Prompt: 028. Anonymous
Apologies: So, everyone was very emphatic that I should continue this piece of trashy porn/melodramatic tragedy. I feel like every segment of this is ( Read more... )

criminal minds, nc-17, x-men, citrus taste, emma/emily

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heart1e55m00mba November 18 2009, 05:22:37 UTC
Morgan and Emily friendship ftw. I'm really glad you're continuing this.

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scoutnabout November 18 2009, 08:09:26 UTC
I'm glad you posted on this; I like this story! It's nice to 'feel' the lapse of time through Emily's eyes while she's in this hell-hole. Way to keep the characters complex and interesting. I'll be watching for the next installment :)

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rivasilvercrown November 18 2009, 17:01:02 UTC
All right... I don't see where is this going... and I like it. I liked it with only the first part, and with each part that you are adding I like it even more... and in a way I'm starting to "hate" you because I am a sucker for happy endings and I can't see this having one >.<.
Great work, specially the way you mix what we know about the canon character with what you do with them(and not only at this installment).

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theatrekid510 November 18 2009, 17:42:01 UTC
I'm also a huge sucker for happy endings or at least endings which give some threadbare possibility of hope and happiness. I think you could still make that little glimmer appear. Rescue's perhaps? what with all the cities about to be bombed and whatnot.

I loved the insight into emily and her situation - now maybe a followup of Emma getting hurt as she was wounded in action and then a final bringing them together only so they may have to stay apart but love from afar??

i was so excited when i saw that you had posted this. keep writing!!

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rebelbyrdie November 18 2009, 19:43:08 UTC
Oh wow that's such a great way to show Em's time in a POW camp. Morgans great!

More please!!!!

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