Bicker 2

[nike_ravus]

Title: Bicker pt 2
Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Rating: NC-17

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Word Count: 2614

Prompt: 035. Blow Job/Going Down
Apologies: Yeah, this is the obligatory(?) Princeton Eating Club AU.  If you don't know what Eating Clubs are, think Hellfire Club for college students.  And

Comments

[atrumnoxnoctis]

I was going to review the first chapter, but seeing as you put in a second installment by the time I was finished, I'd figured this would be as good a place as any to leave a comment. ^^

I really did love that first chapter though. Seriously, I think you completely burned my flu right out of me with that last sex scene! @_@ While it was short, it was the imagery that got hold of me! I was gonna be all on your case if you didn't make it a series or, at the very least, give it another one-shot, and, hey, it looks like I didn't have to. X3 You must be like a mind reader or something! Lol! XD

As for this chapter, geez, Selene really was paranoid about her pet, wasn't she? O.o; I think she might even be more possessive than Emma! XD I'm really curious to see how Emma manages to adjust to the trial run being forced on her. Regardless, I still see her managing to top Emily behind and beyond their bedroom doors. ..God, this is gonna be fucking fantastic! <3

[nike_ravus]

Yay for the medical purposes of Pr0n!

I think I may have to continue this one until initiations. I can't just introduce a St. Andrew's cross and not *use* it!

I don't know who's going to top yet, I suppose we'll find out! And I have a vague image of Selene coming back... for a visit of terror!

[scoutnabout]

I like this idea of Selene dropping by. Maybe she doesn't want her "pet" to stay of the leash for too long...a jealous stint? I love power-play between beautiful, strong women. *roar, hsss, rar* (l.o.l. It must be bed time)

[blackgrl71]

HOLY SHITE! this is an unbelievable start! i can only imagine the scenes, the dialog, the sex, the power struggle, that'll ensue between Emily & Emma. even better is the fact is how their own personalities will change (to some extent). awesome roller-coaster i can't wait to be taken for a ride on.

needless to say i'm glad Selene has buggered off... or at least for the moment. where's Sage?

[heart1e55m00mba]

OMG, this must be the smutverse AU. I'm so happy that you're planning on writing more of this.

Emma was clearly going to destroy them all if she could get Jean to admit to being in a sex club after less than ten minutes of arguing.

LOLLLLLLLLL. Emma has 1337 skillz.

[ol_whatsername]

I've been meaning to comment on these since I finally sat down and read them all over the last couple of weeks and I have to say brilliant job! Before I read these I hadn't the foggiest idea who Emma Frost was other than a basic idea of her being part of the X-Men universe so the idea of her and Emily together was not one I'd ever contemplated, but it totally frakking works. After reading your fics I cannot picture Emily with anyone else, not that I was ever that big a fan of pairing her with JJ.

I loved this one and can't wait to see where it goes, or any fic with this pairing. Keep up the fantastic work.

[nike_ravus]

Thank you!

I love converts!

[authorw]

I love this!
I like how Emily reacts to becoming the mistress!
It should get really interesting!