The Wrong Wall

Oct 06, 2009 18:07

Title: The Wrong Wall
Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Rating: R

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Word Count: 2777

Prompt: 026. Harems
Apologies: I don't even know what happened with this one.  It started off going in one direction and then just wandered wherever the f*ck it wanted to go.  I don't even know ( Read more... )

criminal minds, x-men, citrus taste, emma/emily

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xenasgab October 6 2009, 23:29:53 UTC
More of this please.

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heart1e55m00mba October 7 2009, 01:07:27 UTC
Oh wow. I really enjoyed this. I'm not sure what it counts as either, but I'd love to read more.

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atrumnoxnoctis October 7 2009, 01:38:54 UTC
I was actually wondering what you were going to do with this prompt. ^^ When I saw 'harems', I thought it had something to do with the Hellfire Club. Your take on this actually works rather well. More than that, in fact! I got to see a cameo from the feared, yet beautiful, Selene! <3

I don't know whether it's due to my mind being seriously overworked from college or not, but I'm actually confused about one thing in the fic, and it's been bugging me. << What exactly did Emma mean when she said, "I know what you are," and "I want it"? Did I miss something? Is there something about this Emily that I didn't know about other than being a slave/prisoner? Maybe the 'it' was just a way of Emma saying that she wanted sex then?

The ending made me sad though. We saw Emily escape, yes, but what happened to our favorite telepath? ;.; Oh, and more sadness for Emma's daughter. Did the child even knew that Emma was her mother?

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nike_ravus October 7 2009, 11:47:03 UTC
I wondered for a while myself, but went with the literal. (I was reading the Arabian Nights, which is just sex-death-sex, and all these oversexed women, particularly the one married to the djinn, who had sex with other men to prove that even a powerful magical being couldn't control her, kept reminding me of Emma.) But I was wondering who the Sultan could be. Hellfire Club's Sebastian? Or perhaps the more twisted Professor X?

I believe Emma meant, when she said, "I know what you are," was that Emily was an abomination full of unnatural lusts. :) She was right. And the "I want it" was more of, "I want to experience such unnatural lusts, right now." So yes, basically "give me sex."

The ending was sad. But i won't expound, just in case. :)

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scarimor October 7 2009, 07:24:00 UTC
I love this scenario. You have a knack for blending established genres and making them work well.

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nike_ravus October 8 2009, 12:22:19 UTC
This is in fact exactly what i was going for.

Thanks!

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