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Possessions

Sep 28, 2009 21:44

Title: Possessions
Author: Alsike

Fandom: X-Men/Criminal Minds x-over

Pairing: Emma Frost/Emily Prentiss

Rating: R

AN/Disclaimer: Not my girls.

Word Count: 907

Prompt: 024. Spanking
Apologies: Emily's Notebooks Universe!!!! Probably not too long before Emma gets a certain *very bad* idea.

Erik Magnus was coming to a dinner party at my mistress’ house ( Read more... )

criminal minds, fake empire, x-men, au, emma/emily

Comments 5

atrumnoxnoctis September 29 2009, 03:21:58 UTC

Typical Emma! X3 I can't blame Emily for her reaction though. I mean, hearing everyone laugh at you in ridicule just as you reach your peak at the hands of someone you love (or seemingly infatuated with in Emily's case)? Who wouldn't feel offended and humiliated?

Despite Emma's actions, I really like seeing her showing her insecure side like this through her possessiveness. It makes for great drama. <3

Loved the ending. Looks like they're both getting closer to understanding one another.

theatrekid510 September 29 2009, 17:48:03 UTC

I love that this one can double for the prompt and the notebooks. when i first started reading fake empire i was horrified at the thought of emily being truly subservient to anyone (without it being play), but as the story had progressed, her role as emma's pet almost has given her a bit of leverage and at least some semblance of power with emma herself. this particular fic emulated that. i love where this is going and was thrilled to wake up to another of your stories. it's a collection i'll enjoy reading again and again.

heart1e55m00mba September 29 2009, 17:49:57 UTC

I loved the last line. Brilliant job.

xenasgab September 30 2009, 02:52:17 UTC

And so it begins.

crimsoncat October 10 2015, 06:26:35 UTC

I loved this. Its been really interesting watching the way their relationship develops in this universe. I absolutely adore this pairing. Its not one that I would have ever considered, and I'm curious to know what made you put them together in such a brilliant melding of two extremely different worlds. I've been trying to slow down the speed at which I've been devouring your work. I have no idea how I'll get my fill of this pairing once I'm done reading your fanfics. Brilliantly done, as always. Bravo!