FIC: Along the Way (5/8?)

Nov 08, 2009 13:12

Title: Along the Way
Author: NightRider
Rating: PG
Fandom: The Fast and Furious
Characters: Dom, Brian, Mia, Rico, Tego, and Leon
Spoilers: All four movies
Beta: The forever amazing souleswanderer and fantastic raynedanser
Disclaimer: I own nothing related to Fast and Furious and no money was made from writing this story.
Summary: Dom has questions. He hopes Brian has ( Read more... )

fast and furious, along the way, fanfic

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goddesstar November 8 2009, 19:21:50 UTC
You did a great job on this chapter! The interaction with Leon and Dom was spot on in characterization. I so love this series. Looking forward to the next installment!

~g

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nightrider101 November 8 2009, 19:28:26 UTC
Thank you so much!

I was concerned the introduction of Leon might throw things off. I'm glad it didn't.

Thanks again!

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jujuberry136 November 8 2009, 19:55:23 UTC
Yay Leon!

Loved this chapter, thanks so much for the quick update!

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nightrider101 November 8 2009, 19:56:48 UTC
The quick update comes thanks to NaNo. ;)

Thank you!

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desariwalker November 9 2009, 02:16:17 UTC
I love that you brought Leon into the story, and the means of getting him to Dom was very clever. The characterization and dialogue is perfect; I really enjoy seeing and hearing the characters tell the story. Awesome job. Can't wait for more!!!

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nightrider101 November 9 2009, 02:18:11 UTC
Thank you so much!

I was afraid having Leon show up might throw some readers, but I'd been planning it for awhile. :) I'm glad it worked for you!

Thank you for your continued support and kind words. :)

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nightrider101 November 9 2009, 17:54:36 UTC
Thank you!

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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nightrider101 November 11 2009, 22:24:29 UTC
Thanks, hon! I always look forward to your comments. :)

I'm glad you liked the introduction of Leon. It's going to bring a different dynamic to the group.

Funny you should mention more...

I just posted the new chapter. :)

Thanks again!

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