something...i had to write.....pleaz tell me what ya think be honest brutally honest!
"A deadly memory"
In this mist where i am lost,
i can not find a way out,
yet this all seems similar,
filled with past memories,
the pain and sorrow block my path,
the love i had is now lost,
my body grows colder,
but the vision of us,
still remains behind the vines,
of my torn up heart,
that one last thought of you and me,
the only place i want to be,
it drives me on to make it through,
but your poison is already taking affect,
the clock starts to run out,
my heart beat rate is droping,
slowly im dying,
but the vision of us,
keeps me breathing,
but as i close my eyes and lie down,
the last thought , my last wish,
was us together for one last time,
in these last few seconds,
the back of my eyes show me one last thing,
that same vision replayed again,
this time it played till the end,
the part where you left me and walked away
In this mist where i am lost,
i can not find a way out,
yet this all seems similar,
filled with past memories,
the pain and sorrow block my path,
the love i had is now lost,
my body grows colder,
but the vision of us,
still remains behind the vines,
of my torn up heart,
that one last thought of you and me,
the only place i want to be,
it drives me on to make it through,
but your poison is already taking affect,
the clock starts to run out,
my heart beat rate is droping,
slowly im dying,
but the vision of us,
keeps me breathing,
but as i close my eyes and lie down,
the last thought , my last wish,
was us together for one last time,
in these last few seconds,
the back of my eyes show me one last thing,
that same vision replayed again,
this time it played till the end,
the part where you left me and walked away