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The Pack (19/?)

Oct 16, 2008 15:20

Title: The Pack (19/?)
Author: Nightchaser_sla
Rating: NC17
Warnings (for this chapter): graphic m/m
Summary: A hand ran softly through his hair, and he moved his head so as to nuzzle into Sam's palm before slowly opening his eyes and glaring at her, part of him embarrassed that John didn't seem to want to stop despite the Huntress in the room.
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nightchaser_sla October 17 2008, 04:14:47 UTC

Its been ages since I've written smut and it feels good

galaxy_song October 16 2008, 11:56:08 UTC

Oh this was fantastic I love how they don't bother stopping while Sams tlaking to them:)

and oh so very hot/

saffron_1 October 16 2008, 22:27:17 UTC

Guh Thud wow well i have just read all 19 chapters and am floored, parts are not my thing but overall i was totally floored and loved it. Is it me or is this just some seriously hot stuff, can't wait for the on coming chapters really looking forward to them.

wow if i smoked i would go out for a smoke lol.

xx.xx.xx

goddess47 October 17 2008, 01:07:59 UTC

umm.... oh..... wow....... guh......

Nice and smutty! ;-)

Pack 19 sgafan33 October 17 2008, 11:01:41 UTC

More Pack! Yay! Although that was bizarre to have Sam having a conversation like there was no sexing happening. If it was just starting up, yeah, but near the end? That's kinda rude.

Bitty beta: "Ronan or Teyla were in their meditating..." should be "there"