Title: Translations
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Nothing you recognize is mine. I gain nothing of material value from this.
Pairings: Gen.
Summary: AU. Claire and Melburn Jackson stayed on Abydos after the first mission in 1982. Fifteen years later, Jack O'Neill leads a team to bring them back to Earth and returns instead with their newly orphaned,
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Also, you're the first author I've seen who posts faster at FF.net than on LJ. :)
I'm looking forward to reading more of this!
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And I'm still getting used to LJ, so ff.net is easier for me to work with. But I'm working on it!
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LJ is such a lovely corner of the fandom! You'll find it indispensable, after a while.
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My main complaints with AU's is that my favorite characters are unrecognizable. But I can picture this Daniel, so hurt, so scared, so vulnerable, yet trying to convince everyone he is an adult who can, and should, participate in decisions about his life. Jack is perfect, too, also hurting but trying to put that aside and help this child.
But my very favorite parts are the Daniel/Teal'c scenes. They are so quietly powerful, so compelling that I did something with this fic that I've only ever done once before. When I finished reading it, I went back and started all over again.
Great, great job! And I cannot wait for more of this mesmerizing story.
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Thanks for the comment!
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