Archaeology (20b/30)

[night_spear1287]

Title: Archaeology ( Table of Contents)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Nothing you recognize is mine. I gain nothing of material value from this.
Pairings: Gen
Chapter1a-- 1b Chapter2 Chapter3 Chapter4 Chapter5 Chapter6 Chapter7a-- 7b Chapter8 Chapter9a-- 9b Chapter10 Chapter11 Chapter12a-- 12b Chapter13a-- 13b Chapter14a-- 14b Chapter15a-- 15b

Comments

[sg_betty]

Very well done! It was an excellent idea to have Daniel and Sha'uri opposing each other! Poor Daniel...

[night_spear1287]

Thanks! I was pretty nervous about how it would turn out, so I'm glad you liked it!

[sg_fignewton]

Whew!

Nice call out to 2010, by the way. :)

Creepiest line: when Jack observed that Sha'uri had Amaunet in her head again. Daniel's final thought that he'd been killed by first his brother and then his sister is a very close second!

Great perspective here of the way their thoughts are skewed and twisted, particularly that this Daniel has the conversation about intentions with Teal'c instead of Jack. And Hammond, too - excellent.

[night_spear1287]

Thanks! "Creepy" and "twisted" is probably a good way to describe "Absolute Power" in general; I'm glad it seemed to come off that way.

[kazbaby]

*stands up and applauds*

I can't describe how damn cool this was. You had me holding my breath and cussing at the confrontation between Daniel and Sha'uri. I may have gotten a bit teary-eyed there at the last too when she said goodbye to Shifu.

[night_spear1287]

Aw, thank you! It's a big episode for Daniel and his character, and I'm glad you liked it!

[sg_wonderland]

I'm kind of on the fence about this chapter. Very well written, as ever, but I was just hoping this was a road youngDaniel wouldn't have to travel.

[night_spear1287]

I totally understand that. I wanted to preserve Daniel's connection to Oma, though, which was why he was part of the dream and not just Sha'uri. But things will look up eventually! :) Thanks!