Archaeology (5/30)

[night_spear1287]

Title: Archaeology ( Table of Contents)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Nothing you recognize is mine. I gain nothing of material value from this.
Pairings: Gen
Chapter1a-- 1b Chapter2 Chapter3 Chapter4
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Chapter 5: SG-14

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Comments

[sg_fignewton]

Oh, I laughed that Teal'c had to tell Anise to her face that he'd been so mad with her. Delicious. :)

Daniel's meeting with Charlie-the-Reetou was adorable, and his first meeting with Persus was nothing short of hilarious. But Astor was right there - if she was a zatarc, why wan't it triggered then?

YAY for redundancy checking and YAY YAY YAY for your teaser! I have hopes, now...

(and if Robert turns out to be a zatarc I will hunt you down. :)

[night_spear1287]

Oh crap. Astor was right there. I didn't even think about that, apparently... I will go back and fix immediately.

Thanks!

[sg_betty]

Good chapter--lots of great characterization. Poor Astor and Lewis! Daniel's been kind of a bystander lately, I'm finding myself hoping that he's more in the thick of it soon. :)

[night_spear1287]

I know, poor Astor. Unfortunately, I couldn't find an excuse to keep her alive. But Daniel's involvement will increase by leaps and bounds by the end of this book, so don't worry :)

Thanks!