First fic ever: Shooting Stars

[night_n_sky]

Author: night_n_sky
Title: Shooting Stars
Beta willow_10
Characters: Ten/Rose
Rating: Fluff, romance
Word Count: 796
Summary: The Doctor takes Rose to a magical planet for a bit of stargazing. Who would have thought that both their wishes would come true?
Disclaimer: I don't own the Doctor or Rose or any other Doctor Who character. They're just sitting here in my mind

Comments

Re: magical

[willow_10]

Oh thank you hun! I'm always happy to help make your stories even better ^_^ And I know how difficult it can be to write a character that isn't yours, or any character for that matter and be consistent with them. I know how one can want them to just do something your way, but the thing with people is, they are all so versatile and do things differently from the scenario in your head, all the time.

Personally, I think it likely if Ten and Rose (well, the versions in *my* head...) would have danced a bit around whether or not they should confess their feelings, maybe make a game out of the poking before they suddenly realise how close they physically are...? Or maybe there was some impending doom the Doctor knew about, that made him want to take Rose somewhere nice and kiss her before it was too late? But you see, it's your story. You probably just wanted to describe that point where they actually, finally kissed, for the first time, because they want to (and not because circumstances trick them into it). And it is a wonderful and beautiful story. It is a piece of you, something that you (and more than a handful of readers) would love to see. So, congrats, and thank you, for making this.

Of course, Ten is one of a kind and difficult to predict. That's part of what makes him so amazing, and Tennant such a terrific and versatile actor.

So, nevermind how I would take on this writing, the creative decisions are yours to make. I'm just here to help out with grammar and spelling and vocabulary.

To conclude this really long reply, I'm going to tell you that I'm really looking forward to your next story, and wish you the best of luck and inspiration! xxx